Thanks to morvamp, for her wonderful stories, this prompt, and for letting me post this late. Thanks also to AJ for pointing out exactly where I'd gone wrong. Rating: T++ Words: 3,444
Oh my God, M, you're a terrible tease!! Where was the smut at the end of that? *Jen shakes her fist at you* You write it so well and yet you left me hanging! lol! Okay, so maybe my dirty mind made up for it, but still... ;) I would have loved to read your version. :)
Okay, now that I'm done pouting...I can review.
I absolutely loved this (despite the fact you left me hanging-lol) I swear, no one writes the smooth-sexual-tension-build-up, like you do. It leaves me breathless and desperate for more. Elena and Damon's instantaneous attraction almost melted my screen. And the pre-flight fantasy...whew! I almost blushed right along with Elena. lol!
As always, you've created a believable, outstanding piece of fiction that hits all the right spots! *winks*
M, I love your work even when it *doesn't* have the smut, so that says *a lot*! You know me, if Damon isn't nekkid, I usually won't read it. Lol! But with your work, he could be a Priest and I'd still read the fic because it's yours! ;) ;)
This was amazing, as always. I love the way you set it up with Elena mad at Damon before they'd even met - it added a really interesting twist to things. The chemistry between them was on fire, and that scene where Elena was listening to her music? Super hot.
Oh this was sooo good, I loved the tension and the way Elena just went on and on and had a great time with Damon before even knowing his name. Of course I missed the M-rated part...but it was too good for me to complain about that.
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Okay, now that I'm done pouting...I can review.
I absolutely loved this (despite the fact you left me hanging-lol) I swear, no one writes the smooth-sexual-tension-build-up, like you do. It leaves me breathless and desperate for more. Elena and Damon's instantaneous attraction almost melted my screen. And the pre-flight fantasy...whew! I almost blushed right along with Elena. lol!
As always, you've created a believable, outstanding piece of fiction that hits all the right spots! *winks*
Hope you had a great Valentine's Day, babe!
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I love when you read my work (except when I don't have smut in it).
LOL. Sorry about the lack of M in it.
I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of it.
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Is that a punch?
LOL
PS. I need to leave my review. Too tired last night to leave one.
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Your comments always improve my mood.
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Of course I missed the M-rated part...but it was too good for me to complain about that.
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Your comment made me feel good.
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