Leave It To Fate (Valentine's Day O/S for morvamp)

Feb 16, 2012 01:51


Thanks to morvamp, for her wonderful stories, this prompt, and for letting me post this late. Thanks also to AJ for pointing out exactly where I'd gone wrong.
Rating: T++
Words: 3,444

O/S for morvamp )

damon and elena, fan fiction

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titeve79 February 15 2012, 15:49:10 UTC
That was awesome! I loved it!

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loveepiclove February 15 2012, 21:47:15 UTC
Thank you for reading!

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jenluvsvamps February 15 2012, 16:28:10 UTC
Oh my God, M, you're a terrible tease!! Where was the smut at the end of that? *Jen shakes her fist at you* You write it so well and yet you left me hanging! lol! Okay, so maybe my dirty mind made up for it, but still... ;) I would have loved to read your version. :)

Okay, now that I'm done pouting...I can review.

I absolutely loved this (despite the fact you left me hanging-lol) I swear, no one writes the smooth-sexual-tension-build-up, like you do. It leaves me breathless and desperate for more. Elena and Damon's instantaneous attraction almost melted my screen. And the pre-flight fantasy...whew! I almost blushed right along with Elena. lol!

As always, you've created a believable, outstanding piece of fiction that hits all the right spots! *winks*

Hope you had a great Valentine's Day, babe!

Jen

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loveepiclove February 15 2012, 21:48:18 UTC
Thanks, Jen.

I love when you read my work (except when I don't have smut in it).

LOL. Sorry about the lack of M in it.

I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of it.

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lokya2046 February 15 2012, 23:55:03 UTC
" Sorry about the lack of M in it."

Is that a punch?

LOL

PS. I need to leave my review. Too tired last night to leave one.

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jenluvsvamps February 16 2012, 02:37:59 UTC
M, I love your work even when it *doesn't* have the smut, so that says *a lot*! You know me, if Damon isn't nekkid, I usually won't read it. Lol! But with your work, he could be a Priest and I'd still read the fic because it's yours! ;) ;)

Jen

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dreamssincerity February 15 2012, 16:35:34 UTC
Aww, ha ha, cute^^

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loveepiclove February 15 2012, 21:46:43 UTC
Thanks :)

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parnassides February 15 2012, 16:52:11 UTC
This was amazing, as always. I love the way you set it up with Elena mad at Damon before they'd even met - it added a really interesting twist to things. The chemistry between them was on fire, and that scene where Elena was listening to her music? Super hot.

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loveepiclove February 15 2012, 21:46:23 UTC
Thanks Bex.

Your comments always improve my mood.

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bibi_ca February 15 2012, 18:45:21 UTC
Oh this was sooo good, I loved the tension and the way Elena just went on and on and had a great time with Damon before even knowing his name.
Of course I missed the M-rated part...but it was too good for me to complain about that.

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loveepiclove February 15 2012, 21:45:29 UTC
Thanks darlin'

Your comment made me feel good.

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