Bet Me; Chapter 1; The Return

[loveepiclove]

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[dutchess_sandra]

The fact that she is editing his articles make me laugh.

So they need to work together while - no doubt - fighting the tension between the, and in the meanwhile also trying to outscoop the other; that can only lead to more misunderstandings.

First meeting after ten years - can't wait for tomorrow's update.

[loveepiclove]

Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you liked the bit about her editing his articles, LOL. It made me laugh when I wrote it.

Yes the set up is clear a mile off, LOL.

[aj81writing]

I just love how Elena has been keeping track of Damon all these years, checking for mistakes - it's so telling. Also, how Damon has been keeping track of Elena. Their rivalry is just... it's a powderkeg waiting to explode and I can't wait to watch it all unfold.

[loveepiclove]

I love the term powderkeg. Their rivalry is one of my fave bits :)

[sauriemilia]

I love how they have read each others stuff while in different cities, and how they rivalry made them want to step up their game. They were both nervous to see each other again that its cute, these 28 year olds nervous to be seeing their HS nemesis and unrequited love. I loved the re-meet cute they had, with him steading her like in the prom.

[loveepiclove]

Thanks, I really enjoyed writing their first meeting after ten years. I thought he had to have his hands on her in some way.

[dunedesert]

i love that you built a very good plot here and you kept it interesting at the same time.
please, update soon.

[loveepiclove]

Thank you. You write a very intricate plot in The Substitute, so I appreciate the compliment.

[scarlett2112]

It's funny how they've kind of kept tabs on each other on the sly over the years since they graduated. I wish I could see the look on their faces when they met again after all this time.
It's comical I think that she imagined him to be fat and bald and here in the flesh, he's every girl's dream...Great job Michelle.. So glad the story is back..

[loveepiclove]

Thank you, Carol :)