Bad Habits

Feb 19, 2011 01:41

Title: Bad Habits
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: PG-15
Genre: Romance, fluff
Author's Note: I wanted to write about Jinki's lip-chewing habit, so this just seeped out of my brain ^^'

I glance over at you and you're doing it again; chewing on your lip like no tomorrow. I just can't help but notice since you seem to be doing it more frequently lately. We're at ( Read more... )

rating: pg-15, pairing: onkey

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slickcaffeine February 19 2011, 10:58:46 UTC
hey sweetie, you have my heart with this <3

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lovegrapefruit February 19 2011, 19:31:46 UTC
awww, thanks so much! <333

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rinni1905 February 19 2011, 12:00:17 UTC
So cute! Did you miss me? I miss you a whole lot, where have you been? I've been wondering about it when I re-read some of your fics and pop, you appeared out of nowhere with a new lovely fic in SHINee's 1000 days. I'm so happy. I like this fic like any others, maybe more, because the ending and each detail killed me right away when I read this.

I noticed Jinki's biting lips habit, aigoo, I had the same one too, I even bit it until it bleed. Aigoo, I couldn't give up so I start using lip balm to remind me whenever I want to bit my lip. It's cute that your fic always ends up with sleeping scene, no matter how heated the situation is. Keke, even though I like NC-17 scene a lot, I still prefer love over sex. Thank you for writing this!

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lovegrapefruit February 19 2011, 19:34:31 UTC
Rin! I did miss you too ToT This semester of uni for me is really hard... so I've been so stressed lately and not sleeping very much. I even lost some weight from all the stress T___T

I'm really happy you liked it! ^^ I chew my lips too and sometimes they bleed so we share that habit with Jinki xD

kekeke do all my fics really end with sleeping scenes? Aigoo~ I should change that xDD I feel too shy to write smut so I dunno if I ever will >o<

Anywho, thanks Rin! I miss you~ <33

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ma_yu_ri February 19 2011, 12:36:52 UTC
short, but definitely nice. I keep smiling over the sweetness of it all~ good work! (^_^)b ♥

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lovegrapefruit February 19 2011, 19:32:38 UTC
thank youuuuu ^o^ <3

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jhea76 February 19 2011, 14:09:05 UTC
That was a sweet bad habit..:D
Onkey really makes my day..:D
How I miss reading onkey fics and because of that you are one who shower me with this..:D

SUPER LIKE...
<3

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lovegrapefruit February 19 2011, 19:32:25 UTC
heheh thank you a lot for reading and writing such a nice comment! <33 OnKey is the best! ^^

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omaygawd February 20 2011, 13:24:18 UTC
that was so fluffy, I could die from all the sweetness.
AND I keep looking at Jinki's picture in your banner...lip biting right there! =))
I love it <3 bookmarked

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lovegrapefruit February 22 2011, 06:47:53 UTC
it's so fluffy I could die xD hehehe
thank youuuu so much! <3

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