orange perfection

[lovegrapefruit]

Title: orange perfection
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, angst
Author's Note: I don't want to tell you how this resolves, but I'll give you a hint: I hate angst xD If you have any questions in the end, let me know

Comments

[melalocket]

love this!!!!
omooo >w<

[lovegrapefruit]

aww, thanks~ ^^

[icutkey]

LUV THIS...
JINKI YA..PLEASE TELL I LOVE U TO ME TOO*KIBUM KICKED ME OUT OF THE APARTEMENT*^^

[lovegrapefruit]

hehehe thanks ^o^

[lovegrapefruit]

glad you like it! ^^ thanks!

[justcallme_lisa]

i read this twice.. because i confused at the first.
so jinki is schizophrenia .. heuum .. nice storyy ^^

[lovegrapefruit]

yep, he has schizophrenia... thank you! ^^

[theia88]

wow.. the 1st scene is kinda scary. almost couldn't believe it. Schizophrenia!jinki is somehow cool..
idk how Kibum could survive living with Schizophrenia!jinki, i mean,, jinki almost killed kibum, i think that wasn't the first time.. kibum must love him so much that made him stay still. oh but wanna ask why Kibum had to chew the fruit first before kissed Jinki to make him aware? there must be story behind.. a little story about fruit and it reminds jinki of kibum or something lol

oh i love this. how they struggle and fight Jinki's mental disorder together. and how kibum doesn't give up on him ;__;

thanks for writing this, have been missing your onkey fic :)

[lovegrapefruit]

yeah, it would be really difficult I think to deal with that happening TT well, there's no story behind the fruit, but my idea was that since Jinki was having a delusion, he didn't know Kibum was Kibum... so Kibum kissed him so Jinki would feel his lips and realize he was Kibum... xD hope it's not confusing!

I'm really glad you like it! <3