BLACK DAY 2: mimesis

Apr 02, 2013 11:18

Title: mimesis
Written by: one_if_by_land
A remix of " plasticine" by grisclair
Pairing: Variations of Kai/Lu Han
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Summary: SME's idol androids are programmed to charm and captivate any audience. And isn't imitation the sincerest form of flattery? At least until Jongin gets ditched for the superior robotic version of himself ( Read more... )

black day, rating: nc-17, pairing: kai/lu han

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hipployta April 3 2013, 01:07:43 UTC
Yup...Jongin wants Kai...but Kai touched you on purpose too

Luhan...that was kind of messed up bro

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one_if_by_land April 17 2013, 02:14:14 UTC
I feel like the entire kai vs jongin concept is already so overdone in fic and yet I can't stop falling into the same trap ;;;; thank you for reading!!

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anonymous April 3 2013, 12:44:14 UTC
uguuu first of all, thank you for remixing my little thing~ I thought a lot about the many ways one could remix this keke, but your take on it was something I had not entirely expected. It was only halfway through that I caught on with the subtle difference and the way it deviated from mine - the absolute absence of genuine emotion/affection on Lu Han's part. I love the way you started the story - 7 in the morning for their first meeting - as opposed to the mark of 7 in the evening in the original. I could see the juxtaposition very clearly in my mind. (The first scene was actually a scenario I considered when I started plotting!) I love the way you filled up all the little technical details of their world my original failed to corporate, building on the verse. The essence of the verse and the story is the same, but there's a more blatant casual cruelty peeled open in regards to the industry and human relationships, how everything is a commodity and a kind of resource. At the core of it, as I mentioned, Lu Han's depleted sense of ( ... )

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one_if_by_land April 17 2013, 02:32:09 UTC
sobs, thank you for indulging me even though I blew my cover before I even.... wrote this fic.... but who else can I trust with a comprehensive knowledge of kai's persona :c at least I managed to surprise you with the twist?? hopefully?? though in similar fashion I should confess that I totally guessed the original fic was you so it wasn't too hard to get on your wavelength~~ you always tackle some of the most exciting AUs and I'm super happy that I was given the opportunity to play around in one *__* I'm the kind of person who gets hung up on the small technicalities when trying to build an alternate universe so I'm consistently impressed at how you fearlessly just sort of take universes by the horns and dive into the action. it was a lot of fun working with the framework you set up ( ... )

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euphorias April 3 2013, 13:48:25 UTC
This is simply amazing.
I don't think I can ever possibly describe the level of perfection in this fic.
Utterly brilliant.

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one_if_by_land April 17 2013, 02:33:31 UTC
wow I'm not sure how to even respond? thank you so much :') that is intensely flattering and I'm just glad that you liked the fic!

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barara October 25 2013, 17:24:34 UTC
D:!!!!
I need more...
MUCH MORE I wish this was a series.
One for each member!
Or more Jongin/Kai...
( ̄▽ ̄'')

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