BLACK DAY 8: Aufeis

[lovemixmod]

Title: Aufeis
Written by: pillowfrost
A remix of " zugunruhe winter" by portaldice
Pairing: Kai/Sehun, Kai/Lu Han
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Summary: It's easy to fall when Jongin is so beautiful - Sehun is the seasonal wind that offers Jongin five chances at direction, but he forgets to keep on track himself.

Comments

[hipployta]

Awww...this remix is sad...I'm sticking with the original's lovely happy ending

Nice work though

[euphorias]

Stunning.

[roughly_yours]

Beautiful. And heart-breaking. I love it.

[anonymous]

i really liked that because you kept much of the original, the remixed parts were kind of hazy and came as a surprise. at first glance they aren't obvious but the subtle changes made an immense difference in how this story unfolded. the last line is SO HEARTBREAKING omfg :| my heart aches for sehun and a petty irrational part of myself wants to blame jongin for being ungrateful but he doesn't exactly get his own happy ending either u___u le sigh, author you have done a good job in making a saddish story even sadder ;__; ♥

[nijibug]

That was beautiful, so delicately handled that it was a fulfilling sort of sad. ♥