BLACK DAY 9: paying my heart's outstanding bills (the long division remix)

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Title: paying my heart's outstanding bills (the long division remix)
Written by: colorfunk
A remix of " a liminal (dis)solution" by one_if_by_land
Pairing: Kris/Lay/Lu Han
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: Lu Han needs a clean break and not an open fracture.

Comments

[hipployta]

Realistic but sad...

[colorfunk]

thank you for reading!!

[anonymous]

Huhu reading this was like having my limb slowly amputated. China line threesomes are so good when they're done well and you are excellent T-T.

[colorfunk]

omgosh thank you so much ;;

[chulbaaal]

i rly loved this! T__T didn't hurt as much as the others did, but i still hurt the same.....;__; the characterisations were amazing! kris's leader image There's too much at stake, Kris had said. sobs letting both of them go bc of consequences they might face in the future, both individually and as a group. and then there's yixing! who's ok with all of it (He isn't like Yixing, he can't turn it into pure fuel and motive.). and then theres ur lu han!! lu han here....is my favorite T____T bad to himself lu han, lu han trying hard to adjust, selfish lu han, unwilling to let i all go w/o an assurance that it'll all be ok in the long run T___T

my favorite parts were the....happier scenes /___\ that first flashback (lol @ kris the deadweight), JONGDAE'S CHINESE, the strip-charades scenes (they were so happy sobs T___T), 'prosti--' (!!!), ALL THE LAYHAN, and that...last...scene....T_______T

thank you for writing this!! this was amazing!! ;~;

[colorfunk]

i'm so glad you liked it!! yesss i loved that whole idea of consequences in the original fic, the weight of their careers and what they've worked so hard for, and the break up is positioned as arguably the right decision T T haha yeah the happier scenes were definitely the easiest parts to write... thank YOU for reading, and for leaving such a nice cmnt ;; ♥

[taffyn]

asdkfja;sd such depressingly gorgeous story that hurts my heartttt

[colorfunk]

oh no, thank you for reading :(( <3

[lycheu]

ugh i love the way you write this ot3 of mine omg

its just so wonderful ;~;

[colorfunk]

i'm rly happy you liked it, thank you! ;; ♥