BLACK DAY 14: Death at a Wedding

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Title: Death at a Wedding
Written by: idolkiller
A remix of " One Wedding and No Funerals" by windowright
Pairing: (onesided?)Chanyeol/Kris, Kris/Baekhyun
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: terminal illness
Summary: Chanyeol tries to keep Kris and Baekhyun together. Alternatively: A dying man tries to stick around.

Comments

[anonymous]

SCREAMING where to even begin with this fic??? is this... supposed to be funny... WHERE IS THE DEATH???

on a more srs note, CY was really... likable here. really endearing and sad and the thumbs up/thumbs down was one of my fave parts. you've got a clear grasp on him and somehow spun all his weaknesses into relatable strengths. and you have a great eye for detail! there were a lot of lines that made me go "aaa" bc i could see them happening like a movie in my head :')

crying tho... the weird nonchalant tone this adopted in parts... like is this crack or angst..........??? MY HEART IS LE FLUSTERED "Alternatively: A dying man tries to stick around." <-- ??????

i know this is a terrible comment but i liked this a lot~

[idolkiller]

SCREAMS I HATE U but also omg ;__________; so... flattered.....

[http49]

My heart broke twice tonight. Firstly because of chanyeol. That's a really selfless yet twisted way to love. Yura's reaction is what got me, how wrong she knows it is and how she deals with her brother's sickness. I know only mothers' kisses soothe any pain, but I was really rooting for that one kiss Chanyeol deserved even if he claimed he didn't need it. And that moment he stops Kris from saying he doesn't lov- DRAMATIC GASP

The second time my heart broke was at the end because what's left when Chanyeol's gone? Day 14 shows hope for krisbaek but now that the whole story unfolds and that official/kris pov/ baek pov versions make sense (was their love story ever theirs ...) won't they just collapse? And I guess we'll never know unless you write a sequel or an epilogue or anything really please

Whoever you are, thank you so much. I love you <3

And thank you again, for making drinking wine in coffee mugs happen.

[idolkiller]

sobs i wish i could offer you some positive consolations like "i'm sure krisbaek work it out!!" BUT I GUESS IN THE SPIRIT OF THIS FIC/CHALLENGE those things aren't supposed to be true.... so.... TT_______TT i will just thank you for reading despite everything, i really enjoyed your feedback ;~~~; ♥

THE MOST ROMANTIC Y/Y

[hipployta]

I felt there was more to Kris and Chanyeol in the original story...and this...this is terrible. It's not one sided at all...Chanyeol and Kris could have happened ages ago if Chanyeol wanted it to. If Chanyeol hadn't made the choice to never tell Kris he was sick and never admit he loved him. When he found out he was was sick he imagined Kris was there with him...and his first instinct after that was to never get him involved.

Chanyeol...WHY DID I READ THIS? I saw the warning dagnabit

[idolkiller]

yessss i was interested in chanyeol's involvement in the original too, since he seemed to be around an awful lot lmao ;__; for this story, krisyeol would've been a really good couple but i guess ~for how long~, then... TT___TT ANYWAY thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment <3

[colorfunk]

this is really stunning ;; ♥

[idolkiller]

bahhhhh thank you TT________TT (´ε｀ )

[alexishero]

Pouts forever at this fic. ;-;

[idolkiller]

(っ˘̩╭╮˘̩)っ i'm sorry