Aw, that was so cute. ♥ There were some minor grammatical errors but Jongup's freakin' adorable so it's okay. XD That was a lovely idea and a lovely fic. (and a lovely Jongup 8D) Please do write more. :>
aww I'm sorry for the grammar mistakes... I kinda expected there still would be mistakes since English isn't my first language and this is my first try at writing a story in present tense. MS word didn't underline anything else so I assumed I was safe. I don't have a beta and no matter how many times I proofread it on my own there would still be mistakes .___.
lol I'm glad my mistakes didn't overshadow the idea of the fic :) Thanks ^^
This was so freakin awesome. xD Poor Zelo getting yelled at by Daehyunnie~. :3 Although, I have to admit that I'd love to hear Daehyun get mad. He's too composed all the time. xD
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What a great idea, why he wears the mask. I loved it!
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There were some minor grammatical errors but Jongup's freakin' adorable so it's okay. XD
That was a lovely idea and a lovely fic. (and a lovely Jongup 8D)
Please do write more. :>
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lol I'm glad my mistakes didn't overshadow the idea of the fic :) Thanks ^^
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i love dumbfounded jongup.
daehyun's character and profile<333 ohohoho
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hehe, i love clueless!jongup too xD I kinda think that's how he is in real life anyway xDDD
DAEHYUN IS SO DAYUM oh my bias xD
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Yes! I agree! Daehyun needs to talk more~~~ I love his voice sfm and I'd love to see more personality from him <3333 I guess we all do xD
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