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marsheumallow May 10 2012, 22:01:08 UTC
you're definitely not the only shipper!

this was really enjoyable, poor chen bb was so lost ;___;
i really love the last paragraph ;; ♡

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lovelee2641 May 18 2012, 14:35:43 UTC
OMG HAAAAAYY FELLOW CHENLAY SHIPPER!!!!!!!! OMG SO HAPPY I CANT EVEN ;A; *hugs*

i know, lay just enjoys making him lost like that. *pats poor chen*

i'm glad you love it ♥ i'm trying to give justice to our otp ♥

thanks for reading and commenting bb!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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Re: SO FLUFFY I COULD DIE lovelee2641 May 18 2012, 15:09:31 UTC
lol i just realized that you have a title to ur comment xD haha, i love fluffiness and i cant stand writing angst idek why

aww thanks! of course there'll be more! plase look forward to it!!!

thanks for reading and commenting!!! ♥♥♥♥♥

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yuisan May 10 2012, 22:40:24 UTC
WOW. I really liked this! You made me ship this pairing. This is really adorable. :D
The only problem I had with this is the font that it's in. XD That isn't even criticism. No but srs, you did a really nice job. Keep it up~!

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lovelee2641 May 18 2012, 15:15:58 UTC
YES YES GO SHIP CHENLAY!!!!!!!! /drags you to chenlay ship/
i'm so happy i can convert you into a chenlay shipper~~~ :')

ahh the font, it's the default of the layout, tbh. i'll change it next time if it bothers you :)

thanks for reading and commenting!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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my_midevilmind May 10 2012, 22:54:49 UTC
I love this pairing so much. I wish there was more to his fic
this story is so cute though

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lovelee2641 May 18 2012, 15:42:53 UTC
aww don't worry, i've prepared a sequel ;)

thanks for reading and commenting!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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my_midevilmind May 19 2012, 23:44:10 UTC
Yes! :)
can't wait~~~

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eoryndal May 10 2012, 23:39:54 UTC
You got into Exo only recently? Wow, in my opinion your characterization is very good~

Another thing I really liked about your fic was the point of view you chose to tell the story (for example He gazes in confusion at them and shifts his gaze at Yixing, silently pleading with his eyes to tell him what the hell is going on. ) because it lets the reader experience the same language barrier as Chen.

Ahh, and of course the Chen/Lay <3 There needs to be more!!

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lovelee2641 May 18 2012, 15:50:01 UTC
aww you really think so? thanks! so glad to hear that :')

i agreeeeee! more chenlay to the world pleaseeee! hehe i'm such a deprived fangirl oTL

thanks for reading and commenting!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥

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