WOW. I really liked this! You made me ship this pairing. This is really adorable. :D The only problem I had with this is the font that it's in. XD That isn't even criticism. No but srs, you did a really nice job. Keep it up~!
You got into Exo only recently? Wow, in my opinion your characterization is very good~
Another thing I really liked about your fic was the point of view you chose to tell the story (for example He gazes in confusion at them and shifts his gaze at Yixing, silently pleading with his eyes to tell him what the hell is going on. ) because it lets the reader experience the same language barrier as Chen.
Ahh, and of course the Chen/Lay <3 There needs to be more!!
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this was really enjoyable, poor chen bb was so lost ;___;
i really love the last paragraph ;; ♡
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i know, lay just enjoys making him lost like that. *pats poor chen*
i'm glad you love it ♥ i'm trying to give justice to our otp ♥
thanks for reading and commenting bb!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥
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aww thanks! of course there'll be more! plase look forward to it!!!
thanks for reading and commenting!!! ♥♥♥♥♥
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The only problem I had with this is the font that it's in. XD That isn't even criticism. No but srs, you did a really nice job. Keep it up~!
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i'm so happy i can convert you into a chenlay shipper~~~ :')
ahh the font, it's the default of the layout, tbh. i'll change it next time if it bothers you :)
thanks for reading and commenting!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥
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this story is so cute though
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thanks for reading and commenting!!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥
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can't wait~~~
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Another thing I really liked about your fic was the point of view you chose to tell the story (for example He gazes in confusion at them and shifts his gaze at Yixing, silently pleading with his eyes to tell him what the hell is going on. ) because it lets the reader experience the same language barrier as Chen.
Ahh, and of course the Chen/Lay <3 There needs to be more!!
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i agreeeeee! more chenlay to the world pleaseeee! hehe i'm such a deprived fangirl oTL
thanks for reading and commenting!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥
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