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Oct 07, 2010 16:15

Title: Fantasies
Fandom::Bleach
Rating:NC-17? idk IT'S PORN OKAY
Summary: There were some things you just didn't say in public places.
Character(s): Ulquiorra x Orihime.
Warnings: none
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite
Bete'd: ME
Chapters: NONE
Notes: A request from my dear friend phoenix089 her prompt was "Noncholant Admissions" and it's smut. u///u ( Read more... )

writing: fan fiction, series: bleach, pairing: ulquiorra x orihime

Comments 9

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lovely_masoka October 8 2010, 05:38:49 UTC

u////u That means a lot to me bb. Thank you so mcuh! <3

strawberries_85 October 8 2010, 02:08:15 UTC

Hahahaha, I loved the ending. Go Ulqui's attitude. XD I loved the plot idea to, hehe. Oh, he's such a bad influence on her, but I like it. :p

Overall it was well written too, but there were some small mistakes here and there. Nothing that takes away from the enjoyment of reading the fic though. :)

lovely_masoka October 8 2010, 05:41:14 UTC

He was so fun to write in this fic tbh. XD Fufuuf he really is a bad influence. >8D~

*blushes* Thank you! It makes me happy you like it. <3

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lovely_masoka October 8 2010, 05:44:18 UTC

<333333 Thank you somuch, dear. *hugs*

espadadina October 8 2010, 16:00:34 UTC

Oohohohohohoooo~

This was very sexy mufufufufu.... wonderful job again <3 I like these oneshot fanfics <3
Ending was... GREAT <3 poor Orihime x'D I think she never go that store again x'DDD lul not when that woman is shifts!

lovely_masoka October 8 2010, 19:52:16 UTC

I'm glad you like one-shot fics since that's all I'm good at in writing. xD

espadadina October 8 2010, 22:18:42 UTC

Hohohohoo 8'> sounds goood <3 Can't wait! >////////

phoenix089 October 24 2010, 10:01:05 UTC

Late reply is LATE ... ...

But, Issues ... I have so much love for this!!
I would totally fap to that pronz XDD ... *gestures to the icon* I believe it speaks for itself

I just ... Aaaagh! "I want you." he said again in a nonchalant way that always got on her nerves, his hand reached out and grabbed hers. "Right now." This line is filled with so much EPIC. I love it!! If I were Hime, I so would have taken his hand and dragged him home right then - or at least get out of the public eye and get him to open a rift to get home faster >DDD Just, UNF UNF UNF!

And then sexing in a dressing room? Tee hees~ But then Ulqui's 'I am totally not phased' responses to the store clerks? LOLZ! SO IC it HURTS XDD

But, you completely killed me with “It’s the best way to make sure she stays quiet..” he stated in a calm manner like it was nothing Because it's so-freaking-Ulquiorra like to say that!! No care for what others think, it's just the truth XDDD ( ... )

lovely_masoka January 11 2011, 06:46:11 UTC

omg late ;~;

I'm so happy you liked it though. *still overjoyed*