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Dec 02, 2010 20:52

Title: Birthday Surprise
Fandom::Bleach
Rating: R
Summary: It's Ulquiorra's first real birthday with Orihime, and what kind of surprise does she have in store for him?
Character(s): Ulquiorra x Orihime.
Warnings: none
Spoilers: Time skip?
Disclaimer: Kubo Tite
Bete'd: by strawberries_85 <3333 Thank you so much!
Chapters: ..
Notes: Porn don't read if underage/ ( Read more... )

writing: fanfiction, porn, series: bleach, pairing: ulquiorra x orihime

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espadadina December 3 2010, 09:58:03 UTC
Fufuuffufuuu~<3 Nice Birthday present for Ulqui :fu

I agree with others and I say I liked it too that Orihime was still learning things ~

Niceeeee fanficcc agaiiinnnnn <3333 *hugs*

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lovely_masoka December 3 2010, 23:18:32 UTC
:heehee

*hugs* Thank you so much! I'm very happy you enjoyed it.

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becksatiger December 3 2010, 15:29:40 UTC
That was smexy!
I like the in control Orihime xD - it works really well for her ^^
Is there going to be a part 2 as he was going to 'pay her back' :3?

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lovely_masoka December 3 2010, 23:23:20 UTC
Thank you so much! And yes I love in control!Orihime too. >:3

Well I'm thinking of doing a fic where he "thanks her" but it won't be an exact sequel to this. xD

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jczala December 4 2010, 02:12:34 UTC
Oh man, that was so HAwt! This fic was oozing with SMeXyness! The lemon was just right. Pacing...totally fine. Orihime was so in control. I love that!!!

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lovely_masoka December 5 2010, 01:34:38 UTC
>////< Thank you so much! And me too, I love it when she's in control. <333333

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phoenix089 December 5 2010, 07:20:15 UTC
Oh, bb. Unf! That was really shmexy Issues...

ORAL! HELLS YES! >DDDD

I liked that it was realistic and - like so many others have said - that Hime was still learning what she was doing - The "I don't like the taste" line made me lol.

Though, I especially liked: "If you're changing your mind tell me now." he stated his voice a little hard, not liking how even as she sat there staring he could feel himself grow hard, the adrenaline in his body already moving fast. This woman affected him too much." <-- that >DD Hee hees. It's good to know that Orihime affects Ulqui though we knew that already XD

Fufufufu. And Ulqui's plans for returning the favour! Hee hees! :fu

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lovely_masoka December 5 2010, 07:50:22 UTC
I love writing oral sex tbh. Idky especially for this pairing...just something about Orihime doing that to him that is so sexy.

Haha thank you! <3 I thought it be appropriate since this would be her first sexual relationship and she's a teenage girl. I doubt she has experience. :P Plus it's fun making her innocent when doing something...:heehee not so innocent.

:heehee it had to be added He just gets affected more then he liked or planned ever to be.~ >3

I'll have to do a sequal of some kind since people like that idea.~ XD

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anonymous December 5 2010, 13:44:15 UTC
This fic was awesome to read through. The idea of Orihime wanting to give Ulquiorra a special b-day gift was cute, but the fic itself was -unf- enough said. :fu I adored the detail of Orihime still being unsure about her gift despite she and Ulquiorra having already started a more mature relationsip for months time wise. It made the fic feel more realistic. And more enjoyable too. Heh, Orihime has Ulquiorra completely wrapped up around her pinky doesn't she? :fu

As usual, this is awesome. You get 5 bat cookies out of 5 madam! 8D

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lovely_masoka December 7 2010, 01:17:41 UTC
heehee thank you! <33 I'm very happy you likd it. >///< the realism was fun to do, so I'm so happy everyone likes it and all. *HUGS* *HUGS*

Oh she does. :fu

*NOMS* <3

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