Perfection

[lovely_rain]

THIS IS A POTENTIAL ESSAY FOR COLLEGE ADMISSION- ANY SUGGESTIONS AS TO GRAMMAR ERROR OR ANYTHING AT ALL WOULD BE HELPFUL_ THANKS

Comments

[sexondabeach]

very well done megs. I like it. but i think you could add a little more about the involvements you had at school. I dont know if u write about those somewhere else but itd be helpful to maybe mention two or three involvements. other than that i give you 100%.