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lovelyable

stop calling, i don't wanna think anymore [ fic ]

Nov 13, 2009 02:18

symphonetic, part 1
gd/top | nc-17, 3221 words, ar
how to turn lies into music.

( one. symphonies )

fic, fic: pairing :: gtop

Comments 64

f_i_x_m_e November 12 2009, 19:43:48 UTC

I really like this whole concept!
I'll await the next part, bb!
Keep up the great work!^^

lovelyable November 24 2009, 19:53:43 UTC

Thank you bb! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

shibfish November 12 2009, 20:09:15 UTC

I was wondering when you'd get this out.

Finally.

I love how easily they fit into these new roles - Ji as a kandi kid and SeungHyun as a grunge rocker. I like it. <3

And SeungHyun is such an asshole but you can't hate him for it. Why do you always do that? >|

lovelyable November 24 2009, 19:55:14 UTC

ACK, I KNOW IT TOOK ME SO LONG. My muse likes to torture me and shut me in iron maidens.
Thanks bb! IDK, I have no idea. I like writing Seunghyun as a guy with prickish tendences because I guess he can get away with it. At least with Jiyong. |D

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lovelyable November 24 2009, 19:56:29 UTC

Ahh that made me smile :D LOL I totally have room to improve in the nc17 scenes. I feel like it's just me repeating two lines over and over and IDK how other people pull it off so easily :(

Thank you for reading!

van fucking Beethoven unsospiro November 12 2009, 21:16:31 UTC

That was so great, bb. I can't quote all the parts I like because it would take up this whole box lmao.

But if I had to choose one:

"Ludwig van fucking Beethoven after finishing his very first symphony."

A reference to my lover <3 I almost squealed. I'm obsessed with him and his ninth in case you haven't noticed.

I was thinking to myself, you should get into SHINee and write fanfics; then people would probably build a monument of you in their home countries.

Anyway, once again flawless writing as per usual of my OTP~ ^^

Re: van fucking Beethoven lovelyable November 24 2009, 19:57:40 UTC

YES. I'm actually kind of proud of myself for thinking up that line, haha idk. I must have been in a Beethoven state of mind, his symphonies were playing in the background when I wrote this. (Which is weird. IDK.)

Duuude, I so would get into SHINee but I don't get their appeal, lmfao. I DON'T DESERVE A MONUMENT WHAT

Thanks so much for reading ♥

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lovelyable November 24 2009, 19:59:00 UTC

Don't give me your child! I would be a horrible mother.
Thanks for reading :)