when am i ever??? [ fic ]

Feb 15, 2010 00:32

this is me trying to get my mojo back ;~;. i've lost inspiration to write for about a month (except facebook fic lmao) and i'm trying to slowly wean it back so this is probably not that great but i wanted to get it out in time for raenism's birthday (which i'm still about half an hour late for, gdi). anyway, i don't ship yb/teddy either so idk lmao oh ( Read more... )

fic, fic: pairing :: ybteddy

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envoler February 15 2010, 05:40:29 UTC
SPOT OK YAY EXCITE

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envoler February 15 2010, 06:44:37 UTC
excuse me quoting your whole fic back at you

"Stop making Top-hyung sweat through his suit and go bother your favorite dongsaeng," he hears Jiyong say.

"You're all my favorite," Teddy corrects, but then three steps and his hands are on the back of Youngbae's swivel-chair.

smoooooooooooooth. real smooth

"Kinda scary close-up, actually," and then a minute later, "I used to just go onstage barefaced."

"You think he's a nice guy? He just called me ugly."

screaming i love your teddy sfm. HE JUST CALLED ME UGLY SCREAMING

Against protests from Jiyong that he would rather Seunghyun not be drunk onstage and make a complete fool of himself, to Seunghyun rebutting that he wouldn't be drunk off a beer or two--at most, he'd only be cheerfully tipsy, Teddy brushes a hand on Youngbae's shoulder and squeezes lightly once before walking away.harhar your GTOP ISN'T SUBTLE AT ALL! i love this cause there's so many different things going on in just one sentence and ughhhh. top being a little drunk and gd being all NO NO DRINKING and yb and teddy ( ... )

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lovelyable February 16 2010, 04:16:25 UTC
SHRIEK LOOK AT YOUR LONG COMMENT my life has been made :'))))))

I'M GLAD YOU LIKE MY TEDDY, i re-watched big bang tv and tried to emanate him except the parts where he was CLEARLY creeping on yb, there is no other explanation for it omg ugh blocked from mind so good i'm happy my effort was not in vain. /puts cap on

OK YOU KNOW THIS ORIGINALLY HAD ABOUT 10X MORE GTOP THAN IT ENDED UP BEING SO i mean be glad it's not a gtop story with a ybteddy cameo okay. this is how much of a stan i have become, sobs why why are they my life ;~;

ahhhh i'm glad you liked this and it wasn't disappointing yayyay ty ♥

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kireji16 February 16 2010, 04:41:10 UTC
"you're such an awkward turtle." THAT IS SUCH A CUTE EXPRESSION!

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xbigbangx February 15 2010, 05:47:25 UTC
gmfd.,ms spoooooooottt
and dang someone got here before mee

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xbigbangx February 15 2010, 06:10:38 UTC
aaaaww that was ridic cute~
lots of little cute moments and funny moments~
thanks for writing this~
been wanting to read another yb/teddy fic latellyy :Db
I really like this. a lot.
the awkwardness on YB's part is rather cute.
makes me smile a lot
thanks a bunch for this.
keep up the good work!
anyhow, idk what to put so peace out.

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lovelyable February 16 2010, 04:18:24 UTC
yb's middle name is awkward ;-; but ty for reading~

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whetstone February 15 2010, 06:19:16 UTC
i get what you said earlier and i can see what you mean, but i still enjoyed this. i think it's so laid-back and relaxed is because that's how yb/teddy seem to be? idk that seems to be the vibe i got. :D

i think teddy's nonchalant reaction and yb having a silent freakout are so them, and omg it has choice in it and awkward yb and hoodie teddy with his dumb hats and cl dancing to aaliyah yaaay.

IN CONCLUSION: girl why you trippin. ♥

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lovelyable February 16 2010, 04:21:09 UTC
TY SOBS ;~~~; ♥

(because my lip gloss aint poppin :'S

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lovelyable February 16 2010, 04:24:19 UTC
yeaa that's my bad, i was contemplating putting another one in at the end but i just couldn't ;-;
but ty anyways for your thoughtful comment :)

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lovelyable February 16 2010, 04:25:47 UTC
mlfaksd thank you ;-;

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