make it work! holla atcha boi! [ fic ]

[lovelyable]

that boy is a monster
gd/top | pg-13, 1794 words, canon
taec, meet your rival in fashion terrorism.

Comments

[cokecane]

LMAO GD doesn't actually have the cred to be bashing TOP's fashion sense, but he does it anyway. :D My favorite part is where TOP is titled a designer's trash can. (Also, can you imagine Seungri waltzing into Junsu's dorm in those Aladdin carpet pants and going "These are Armani!" or whatever?).

Aw, fatass and skinny. True love. <3

[lovelyable]

LOL I LIKE HOW EVEN YOUR DEFAULT ICON LOOKS LIKE SHE'S A COKE ADDICT. you are gud jab. and hdu gd always looks fabulous even if he is wearing fashion police worthy outfits! lmao can you just write me some seungrijunsu with all these moments you have been talking about? n____n?

aw :')

ty ♥

[cokecane]

LMAO. I just thought she looked like Lady Gaga and the concept of Alice getting arrested was funny. I guess in Wonderland you can do hookah and not have mercury regulations, but you can't do crack; 'tis unfortunate. Maybe I'll write the Suri superawkwardderpderp!moments, probably after school ends in a month-ish.

n______________n/|== ♥♥♥ (fx: pew pew pew!)
^it's holding a gun shooting hearts if you don't see it. :D

[lovelyable]

WHERE DID YOU GO YOU JUST SIGNED OFF SIGH YOUR INTERNET >8(((((

what, who says you cant do crack in wonderland? this does not sound like a place for me. can you just write them now!!! :) :)!!!

LMAO OH YOU <3 o(n_____n)o i cant think of creative smilies :(

[xinliyoushu]

It's cuuuuuuuuuuute (and really believable)! I'll never get tired of seeing what TOP pulls out of the closet next. Oh and "RuPaul's wardrobe" made me LOL for real. XD

[lovelyable]

what are you doing here! HAAA RUPAUL, i love him! thank you for getting the reference :) i'm glad you liked this ♥

[whetstone]

dude i love how snarky this is. "You got pants made out of Aladdin's fucking magic carpet?" made me lol irl. idk, this is just light and hilarious and i could totalle see this happening. the bear ring ahhhhh. also when jiyong had his little *__* moment with top in the blazer, i totally made a :3 face.

ALSO THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH WRITING OUTSIDE OF YOUR WIP LIST OK. >__>

[lovelyable]

if by snarky you mean i have just proven to everyone that i cant write humor at all, then yes i agree n___n but thank you :( :( ♥

mfmksmdlfm strangles self

[corpuscallos_m]

I loved this so much. you write very well and I can totally see both of them in this.

"You got pants made out of Aladdin's fucking magic carpet?"

^made me lol hard.

[lovelyable]

i think the worst part is he is highly susceptible of actually buying pants like that :( thank you for reading!

[moeruze_burning]

ikrsdfvhdfg omfg loooool.

I love how they just hand the shit they don't want anymore down to Seungri. XDDD

I also love the brown bear ring and I want one. ;; ♥

A tiny bit of concrit;

[...]or in the midst of a party with Jack Daniels after their boyfriends/girlfriends left them.

That seems really awkward to me. Maybe "boyfriend or girlfriend (had) left them", or "after a (adject) breakup" or something?

I don't know, that line just stood out as awkward to me.

[lovelyable]

and then seungri just auctions everything off on ebay and uses the money to get himself some more dior.

yea you're right, the sentence is awkward as helllll. i'll see what i can do about it. thanks!

[moeruze_burning]

There is an ebay addict somewhere out there with really ugly pants. |: