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lovelyable

my kingdom for a horse [ fic ]

Jun 21, 2010 19:55

it's all static, baby (a year's progress)
gd/top, pg-13, 3442 words, canon
how to get over somebody, told backwards. for kpop_olymfics

( jiyong wakes up thinking about a song. )

fic, fic: pairing :: gtop

Comments 66

Wah~! fakemoon June 24 2010, 00:35:12 UTC

That was depressing and cheerful and sad and cute and fluffy and whole bunch more! I read it from top to bottom, but I'm glad I did. I think I would be crying if I read it the other way...

Loved it!

Re: Wah~! lovelyable June 24 2010, 16:11:46 UTC

thank you for commenting :)

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lovelyable June 24 2010, 16:13:06 UTC

oh :( i'm really happy you liked it, don't cry! thank you so much for reading and commenting, alfklksfj. /tissue

freefallskyline June 24 2010, 16:50:10 UTC

oh man oh my god summer, this was fantastic. I loved it :(

lovelyable June 28 2010, 05:42:13 UTC

ahh really? thanks viva!! ♥

you get a comment in list form. pregnantcigar June 28 2010, 17:52:22 UTC

things that hurt:
"Jiyong, don't."
the quiet way in which yb knows, always.
Jiyong used to think things like that were one-time-use and thrown away when the relationship ended, but no, it's all just recycling
he feels slightly odd knowing that by the time she figures out how to tell, too, it'll be in retrospect. fucking hell.
they pick up where they left off, oh god, summer, this hurt so much.
daul.
march.
"I'm gonna leave, okay?"
"You're always good, Ji,"

and i loved this line:
It's a day when it should be snowing but it's like the sky is waiting for something and holds it in instead.this was so good, summer. you had control over the slow unfolding of the narrative as well as over all of the characters, even minor ones (seungho *__*), and it felt like the retelling of an true story. i love reading something and being able to accept the characters as they are presented to me--being able to trust the author, which i did here. not to mention this hurt as all fuck, because breaking up is pretty much always the same, in any country or ( ... )

Re: you get a comment in list form. lovelyable June 30 2010, 21:53:27 UTC

oh cries ;_____; diana you totally made my entire day with this comment. i dont even know what to say except thanks and that i'm so flattered you liked it :') i love seungho :d DON'T CRY!!

Re: you get a comment in list form. pregnantcigar July 5 2010, 14:36:34 UTC

you deserved an appropriate comment ;__; and argh at lj for not sending out comment notifs on time >:|

saime_ika June 28 2010, 18:14:01 UTC

Woah o.O That was just amazing, leaves me really speechless.

I'm glad I stumbled across your site :)

lovelyable June 30 2010, 21:53:50 UTC

thank you! :D