Comments | lovelyable: i dont even know what this is [ fic ]

lovelyable

i dont even know what this is [ fic ]

Sep 03, 2010 01:43

we both put our hands up
gd/top | pg, 411 words, canon
so there's this dream jiyong has sometimes, see.

( gd/top )

fic: pairing :: cescvilla, fic, fic: pairing :: gtop

Comments 9

gdgdbaby September 3 2010, 05:56:22 UTC

hello hello why are you so great :D! okay dude seriously, the gtop was so good :( your imagery is always A+ and i love what you did with the prompts! stop second guessing yourself all the time gdi :|

AND THE END OF THE CESCVILLA ONE, CRYING. T_T DAVEED WAYLT.

lovelyable September 3 2010, 16:54:42 UTC

ahhh i love you so ♥

whetstone September 4 2010, 00:10:14 UTC

man i really like the voice that's present in the narrative for both fics, how different and how different/fitting they are in tone. also the descriptions were really evocative, especially something he hangs onto and occasionally remembers to lean back into, something that steals his cigarette and is eyes-closed on the carpet and the thing about the soundboard. *~*

lovelyable September 13 2010, 01:11:21 UTC

ty! you always make me feel better about the shit i write lmao.

masquedtears October 8 2010, 20:44:07 UTC

Wo-oww, you`re g-top is so amazing.
I love this style of writing but now a days I find it so rare to find.
any a beautiful read. ((:

lovelyable October 15 2010, 01:05:40 UTC

thank you! :)

elisa88 August 15 2011, 16:24:46 UTC

I really enjoyed reading the second story (shame on me for not reading the first). It's so amazingly written, the pace, the details, it's so.. I don't know, it is incredible though, that I know. ♥

lovelyable August 27 2011, 11:02:15 UTC

oh i'm glad you enjoyed it! it was somewhat of an experiment for me so i'm glad it didn't seem like a bunch of nonsensical blathering on. thank you ♥

larapidez January 3 2012, 10:55:04 UTC

That waw a very nice idea, indeed. The lack of capital letters annoyed me a bit, though.
Oh, and cool pictures to accompany the ficlets!