hey, my sun-eyed girl (i've landed) [ fic ]
hey, my sun-eyed girl
cl/seungri | pg-13, 2459 words, canon
crushes can crush you.
for pause and envoler with this prompt. originally posted here, 09/20/2010.
( this is what seungri remembers. )
cl/seungri | pg-13, 2459 words, canon
crushes can crush you.
for pause and envoler with this prompt. originally posted here, 09/20/2010.
( this is what seungri remembers. )
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That being said, ficcies.
I love Seungri. I lovelove the way you write him, because you do in fic exactly what he does in real life--make him obnoxious and a brat and arrogant and vulnerable and young and so completely love-worthy. I'm not a huge fan of the CL/Ri pairing--no chemistry imo, but to me, a writer makes the pairing and I was just craving their hook-up that never came (I didn't read the prompt-fail). But it was of course better this way, and I adore how Seungri kind of stop-start-falls for her and that he's a coward and that he buys her a Coke as confession. I really, really want you to write him more.
That said, I love (need a new verb) five things fics. Love them. And you just nail down the GD that lives in my head so well, and all of them were just perfect. A+.
/long comment.
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and then minji sticks her head out of the backseat window and says, "we're going to the river, oppa!" and seungri silently amends that maybe chaerin's not the one with the wrong idea.
This part made me laugh so hard, oh Seungri :(((
You write them exactly how I've always pictured them, somehow - and your Chaerin, she's kind of perfect and I see how Seungri got obsessed ♥ And when Jiyong and Seunghyun tried to dissuade him from Chaerin - that was just classic, ide. They would think they're doing him a favour 8D
I was too excited to tell you how much I loved the CL/Seungri to get to the second fic (LMAO SELF) so I'll go about reading it now. :Db Do write more CL/Seungri, oh my god.
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LOL POOR SEUNGRI, his life is really hard. i'm really happy that you think the whole progression of their relationship comes off believable and not too cliche, and i'm esp glad that my version of chaerin - at least, chaerin when she's with seungri - works.
DW DW about the second fic! thanks so much for the review on the first one ♥
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lmao can i say i just got the title for the cl/seungri and i love it, so fitting and clever. ♥ anyway, i kind of flailed to you about it before but i love their dynamic and how everything started flowing one way; then you get that little twist at the end and jeez, i can't blame either of them. that little detail with yb was such a motherly little touch that i loooved.
it's so apparent he feels a bit foolish, and then abruptly remembers that chaerin has always been somewhat of a terrible liar the same time he realizes she would never, ever look this way about him twisted my heart, poor strong baby. :( and let me just reiterate how much i love the gd-centric one because i do, rocketships and being tired of japan and how old and yet young he is at the same time. love. :D
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I DIDN'T EVEN PLAN IT THAT WAY! when i was writing it i thought about which songs would go well with the fic (and i had no idea for the title) so i was like o ya, i bet that one song by beck would be good - and then i looked through the lyrics and i was like floored. YA BASICALLY IT WAS FATE. 8D i couldn't help myself with the yb detail! ty for noticing it.
and your comment on my gd fic still maketh me happy, so yes. TYILY ♥
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I think I secretly love those two O.O kekeke
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