Comments | lovelyable: hey, my sun-eyed girl (i've landed) [ fic ]

lovelyable

hey, my sun-eyed girl (i've landed) [ fic ]

Sep 21, 2010 16:05

hey, my sun-eyed girl
cl/seungri | pg-13, 2459 words, canon
crushes can crush you.

for pause and envoler with this prompt. originally posted here, 09/20/2010.

( this is what seungri remembers. )

fic: pairing :: clseungri, fic, fic: centric :: gdragon

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lovelyable January 21 2011, 01:11:38 UTC

i'm glad you liked it! thank you :)

nomdeplumejam April 28 2011, 06:10:18 UTC

WAAAAAH. Ririn fic for the win~! Classic writing... slice of life is there, I dunno but as I read on, I could really picture them, especially Seungri doing what you wrote in the succeeding scenes. I love how you wrote his chain of thoughts, too cute, and Seungriness just ooze out~ ^^ And CL is just, uh, *sniff* too clueless for her own good, Haha! Well, to say the least, I'm just happy, in love and glad to come across this lovely fic. And of course, CL x Seungri is my OTP <3 (I actually skip GD's part so I could instantly comment, LOL, but of course I'll read it after ^^) I'll add you as a friend, okay? Hehe.. 'cause I really admire your work. FIGHTING!!!!!!!!!!!! ^^

lovelyable May 5 2011, 15:19:32 UTC

thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed :)

omonayun May 5 2011, 17:36:29 UTC

I don't get to read CL/Seungri fic pairings very much so when I chanced (Chanced? Who am I kidding? It's obvious lurking your LJ has become my new hobby.) upon this one, I made sure to draw hearts around it so I wouldn't miss it when I got off work. And it's nice. It's nice how you practically killed Seungri in this one. How, even in heartbreak, he gets no pity. How, although everyone thinks he's the most feckless piece of effort around, he's still able to hold himself when faced with rejection.

And then there's your GD, who's both omniscient yet bewildered, cautious yet curious. Always loved how you get into GD's thoughts like this!

lovelyable June 30 2011, 21:10:05 UTC

oh god all my responses to your comments are going to be astoundingly late, so sorry ;___; i'm glad you liked both of these despite the fact that i emotionally killed strong baby (dont worry he's tough) and made gd waaangst. :D

calixa August 3 2011, 05:36:59 UTC

UGH I LOVE CL/SEUNGRI SO MUCH. Such good fic, and exactly how I imagine them to be around each other. OH MY HEART.

okay i am a horrible person for responding late :< lovelyable August 27 2011, 10:51:34 UTC

but thank you so much for the compliment!! i'm always doubting myself about characterization so i'm glad it was okay :)