with more feeling and gusto [ fic ]

Jan 22, 2011 00:55

all together now
gd/top | r, 2193 words, canon
no one else will have me like you do.

august. happy birthday, seunghyun says. )

fic, fic: pairing :: gtop

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amandajaclyn March 28 2011, 15:04:18 UTC
this is absolutely beautiful. i love your style of writing and i can't wait to read more of your works. even minus the fact that characters here are GD and TOP, the love story itself is just as heart-wrenchingly and painfully real.

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lovelyable April 15 2011, 01:16:30 UTC
thank you so much!

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omonayun May 5 2011, 18:05:02 UTC
February's my favorite month.

Sometimes he tastes like mint from his toothpaste, oranges from the fruit Daesung cut up for after dinner, or wine after you make him turn off his computer and stop working for the night. Lozenges when he's sick and you don't care, gross in the mornings and you're hogging his blankets. Or smoke from the cigs, weed when he has it

This is my favorite part.

"Happy birthday," Seunghyun says. Inside the box he gives you is a pair of shoes; an expensive, expensive pair of shoes.

I saw that, and always wondered how personal it must be, to send someone a pair of shoes you just know they would like? T.O.P looks too confident in that video. I wonder if that was what you hand in mind?

It's 2am and I have a flight to catch in the morning and I had a group exercise class that almost disjointed me and I'm sorry this comment is incoherent a tad.

Loved it, as always.

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lovelyable June 30 2011, 21:11:16 UTC
alskdjgl i'm glad you liked this one too ;_; this turned out to be my baby so i'm really happy it's being received well. love incoherent comments!

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seamanthedog April 14 2012, 08:28:03 UTC
I thought this was going to end all angsty and sad, not that I wouldn't have enjoyed that, but I enjoyed that it ended tenderly sweet.

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