Siempre Hay Algo Más - Chapter 5

Oct 23, 2010 20:14

Title: Siempre Hay Algo Más

Rating: R

Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

A/N: Didn't make y'all wait tooo long for this one, did I? Hope y'all enjoy!

A/N 2: Okay, I edited the chapter a bit to clear up some of the confusion. Sorry for making it too ambiguous! I hope it makes more sense now...

Just give me some candy after my hug )

siempre hay algo mas, fanfic

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swiftlyreloaded October 24 2010, 20:16:43 UTC
don't know if I've said this before I REALLY am luvin this fic.
THANX for the "quick" update & PLZ update again SOON! =)

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lovelyafterglow October 25 2010, 16:24:10 UTC
Hahaha...it super-duper "quick".

Thanks for always dropping by to comment, and I'll work on getting the next chapter out "soon".

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ur5amaj0r October 25 2010, 03:36:30 UTC
Just wanna let u know that I'm a BIG fan of your fics and am patiently waiting for u to update it (this one, todo lo que tengo & the translation of Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski).

Thanks for the update, ya! And PepSi 4ever! Woo hoo!

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lovelyafterglow October 25 2010, 16:25:00 UTC
Why, thank you! ;-) I'm glad you're enjoying all the stories.

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ur5amaj0r October 28 2010, 15:53:17 UTC
Your most welcome!
And I can see you've updated this fic! :D
*scoot off to read the new update*

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anonymous October 25 2010, 15:10:53 UTC
i really like this fic and i can't wait to read the next chapter...hope it will be very soon.....

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lovelyafterglow October 25 2010, 16:25:40 UTC
Thanks for the comment! I'll try to get a new chapter written out as soon as possible.

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junebuggy01 October 25 2010, 15:58:22 UTC
OMG OMG OMG! You so totally updated! *Cries in over excitement* AHHHHHHHH!!! *Smiles and jumps* And it was so great! They totally had drunk_smut didn't they?! xD

Loved the teenage them too. Poor Pepa being so in love with the redhead, only to think that the redhead would never see her that way. *sighs*

I love this fic way too much. I already want more! *Faints*

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lovelyafterglow October 25 2010, 16:36:09 UTC
They totally had drunk_smut didn't they?!

Oh, noooo. No, no, they didn't have drunk_smut. Does it come off like that? I think I might have to go back and edit the chapter if that's what people are gleaning from it.

Perhaps it was only clear in my own head that Pepa just picked up some random chick while Silvia spent the night with Eva. Silvia was in a good mood because, well, she had sex the night before, but also because she got to rub her good mood in Pepa's face a bit. Make sense? Yes? No?

I'll get started on the next chapter as soon as I can!

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junebuggy01 October 25 2010, 16:54:11 UTC
Well, no, it doesn't come off entirely like that. I just really wanted that to be it. Because then, you could do like, a flashback of them fumbling around to climax xD I've never read fumbling_smut before! *Smiles stupidly*

But thanks for clearing that up for me, because seriously, once something is in my head, it kinda needs to be beated out of me. xD BTW, beated is totally a word!

Please, yes, get started now! Now would so be better than later! And then you could like, have an update by like, tonight? Yes? Alright. *nods*

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lovelyafterglow October 25 2010, 17:50:40 UTC
Well, don't get ahead of yourself now, juney. There's still plenty of time for drunk and/or fumbling smut in this story! ;-)

Work has been pretty slow so far today, so maybe I will actually get some writing done right now. (Of course, now that I've said that, my inbox will probably start filling up with emails...)

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drunk smut anonymous October 25 2010, 23:07:37 UTC
For the (anonymous) record, it totally comes off as drunk-smut between Silvia and Pepa! I immediately thought that too. I was wondering how you made that leap, but more than a little curious too. Sigh. Have it your way. BTW: Barcelona is amazing. You're going to love it. My favorite is Park Guell. Me encanta la obra de Antoni Gaudi. (I also like Whoville and, let's be honest, there are some similarities.)

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Re: drunk smut lovelyafterglow October 26 2010, 00:45:16 UTC
Eep! Okay, I edited the chapter to make it clearer what happened. Sorry, no drunk_smut between Pepa and Silvia...at least not yet(?). ;-)

Haha...Whoville. Yeah, that sounds like an apt comparison. It should be awesome.

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