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Siempre Hay Algo Más - Chapter 9

May 23, 2011 17:56

Title: Siempre Hay Algo Más
Rating: R
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

A/N: I know, I know...an update in less than a week!? Color me just as surprised! This chapter obviously involves the now-famous Communion...I hope I did the scene justice.

( 'cause when you're standing oh so near, I kinda lose my mind )

siempre hay algo mas, fanfic

Comments 20

pepsilove64 May 25 2011, 17:34:55 UTC

That was just beautiful! Thanks lovely!
I could see Pepa throwing one last smile at Silvia
I miss them, can't wait to read what happens next

lovelyafterglow May 26 2011, 00:11:11 UTC

You're welcome! I'll try to keep up the roll I'm on and get the next chap. out asap. ;-)

suying87 May 30 2011, 14:38:55 UTC

hey lovely! i only know pepsi for 2 months and really in love with them! been reading loads of fics and i really love the way your fic goes.. well done and thank you! =D hope to read more of your fics-both of them *ahem* ;-) cant help wondering what happened between present them.. cant wait for your updates!! xD

lovelyafterglow May 31 2011, 14:03:12 UTC

Thanks for commenting! It's nice to hear that people are still discovering and falling in love with PepSi!

I'm glad you're enjoying the fics, and I'll try to get an update out soon-ish for this one. ;-)

junebuggy01 June 3 2011, 04:03:28 UTC

*sighs happily* That was superbly wonderful, Lovely! And so right! You write them so well, and this fic is just insanely wonderful and I loved that you had them smiling at each other as they were being dragged away, and I love how they're going to make up in the present and the way Pepa asked Silvia to dinner and OMG I'm gonna pass out from how awesome this chapter is!!! *breathes deeply* Okay.. I'm okay... I think... Yeah... Um... Write more, kay? And way soon, please, thank you.

lovelyafterglow June 7 2011, 14:06:57 UTC

Whoever said they were gonna make up in the present? What if I intend to have them go on hating each other forever and forever...?? Yeah, yeah, okay, we both know that's not gonna happen. ;-)

I will write more...just not too sure about the 'way soon' part. I'm going out of town for a family visit, so hopefully once that's out of the way, I can hunker down and knock out another chapter. We shall see...

ur5amaj0r June 24 2011, 04:21:39 UTC

Pepa asked Silvia out, and she said yes and actually liked it.
All is well. :)

And you wrote the communion scene so wonderfully. They're actually smiling at each other while being dragged away from each other? Damn. That was so cool. Very dramadreamic ;)

lovelyafterglow June 28 2011, 15:48:52 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you liked the scene. ;-) Yeah, I wanted it to come off as really "film-like"...I think "dramadreamic" is pretty close, though, no? :-)