Siempre Hay Algo Más - Chapter 10

Jun 28, 2011 23:13

Title: Siempre Hay Algo Más
Rating: R
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia

A/N: I had to fight myself to stay away from the x-box and get this chapter hammered out. I hope y'all appreciate the great effort that took! I apologize if the end is a little rushed, but effing caca! I'm tired of working on it, and I'm ready for bed. :-P Once again, a special thanks to ms_moodifiedRead more... )

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ms_moodified June 29 2011, 11:42:09 UTC
You are evil! I was so digging that dinner date between Pepa and Silvia, and you tricked us!! :P

I still love the chapter, though. It had the perfect combination of sweetness and angst. Everything is coming together perfectly.

I feel bad for 'present Silvia'. I'm guessing Eva is up to no good, though Silvia was on her way to a date of sorts with Pepa herself, even if she would refuse to call it that, I'm sure. I see more angst coming before everything gets resolved in a 'happily ever after' manner for our girls. Because, it will be happily ever after, right? I'm not specially sappy, but I need a happy ending for these two! ;)

And poor 'past Pepa'. The only person she thought would never abandon her just told her she's leaving, and after what they've just shared. *sighs*

Great chapter, lovely. Keep them coming!!

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lovelyafterglow June 29 2011, 14:22:37 UTC
Lol...Yeah, everybody was leaving comments on the last chapter about looking forward to the dinner date, and all I was thinking was, "There ain't gonna be no dinner date, biotches!" I feel just a teensy-weensy bad about my chicanery. :-P

It was not a date of sorts! Not a "date date", anyway, but a "let's-see-if-we-can-be-friends get-together"! A get-together, I tell you! Eva, on the other hand, appears to have been on a "date date"...the hussy.

Poor "present Silvia", poor "past Pepa"...I just love putting these girls through the emotional-wringer, eh? And there's still more to come. Only two more chapters to go, though, so just a bit more angst before the end. Now, whether it'll be happy one or not remains to be seen. *evil grin* ;-)

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ms_moodified June 29 2011, 16:47:26 UTC
It was not a date of sorts! Not a "date date", anyway, but a "let's-see-if-we-can-be-friends get-together"! A get-together, I tell you!

Riiiiight... :P

Now, whether it'll be happy one or not remains to be seen. *evil grin* ;-)

*stares gaping at screen*

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lovelyafterglow June 29 2011, 17:48:37 UTC
Riiiiight... :P

I'm glad you agree! It was totally innocent.

*stares gaping at screen*

Did I forget to mention that I've been kinda trying to mirror events from the show?? Mmhmm...so, speaking of dates, Silvia must have a date with a bullet coming up. But I'll let everyone out of their misery quick and have it hit her between the eyes. *bang!* Muerto.

I kid, I kid (morbidly). I'm a fucking sap when it comes to fic...I don't think I could write a sad ending even if I wanted to, and I really don't want to. The way their story ended on the show was horrible enough. I think they deserve some happiness in the fic-verse, no? :-)

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reiimy97 June 29 2011, 13:22:51 UTC
I never like Eva from the start and I'm super happy when Silvia finally see her true colour. I hope Pepa wouldn't give up on Silvia yet.
Thank you for this update.

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lovelyafterglow June 29 2011, 14:24:32 UTC
I've never liked Eva, either! But, then again, I've always known she was going to end up being a bad apple. :-P

Pepa's definitely not gonna be happy about being stood-up, but time will tell whether she gives up on Silvia or not.

And thank you for the comment!

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sniff... satou_san June 29 2011, 13:39:40 UTC
that made me cry... i know how hard it is to be stood up by someone you really like let alone love... obviously silvia didn't mean to, but still... i hope they find each other soon, in some sense. find love in each other. thanks for the update... =)

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Re: sniff... lovelyafterglow June 29 2011, 14:29:06 UTC
Aww...sorry about making you cry. :-( I have no idea what's it like to be stood-up by a girl. Not because I'm a super badass who's never been stood-up on a date, but because I've never really been on a proper date in the first place!

The dinner was definitely a missed opportunity to get closer, but it's still not too late for them, I don't think. ;-)

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bsofthewest June 29 2011, 14:36:22 UTC
My stomach is churning from all this angst....as one of our better writers, I know that makes you happy.
Go back to your "official reports and manuals". We will be waiting....waiting for more PepSi.

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lovelyafterglow June 29 2011, 15:21:50 UTC
I knoooow...I turned the angst on full-throttle in the last few chapters, huh? :-/ Sowwy.

Haha, I was joking about the manuals, though. Hopefully, I won't make you wait too much longer for more PepSiness!

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pepsilove64 June 29 2011, 20:30:51 UTC
Hi lovely, thanks for the update!
I hope they find their way back to each other.
and a happy ending please!
Great chapter as always.

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lovelyafterglow June 30 2011, 14:55:56 UTC
Thanks for commenting...and for sticking around so long to read the story! Over a year later, and we're getting oh-so-close to the end of this fic. It won't be too much longer to find out how it's all going to end!

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