Breathless: Chapter 1

Aug 01, 2011 11:12



Chapter One

It was strange, really, how his family had greeted Jaejoong. Not even minutes into the introduction, and the Jung Family treated Jaejoong as if he were a part of their family. What surprised Yunho the most though, was what he learned about Jaejoong from his younger sister, Jihye.

The squealing and gushing, ( Read more... )

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takelo14 August 1 2011, 16:27:31 UTC
Awwww jihye is so nice and adorable :3 i like her ^^ but jisun.... ugh.... i just dont like the vibes she gives off (not to mention her thoughts >:O

LOL but i like the slowly developing yunjae :)

update soon bb ^^ <33333
it took you so long for this chapter :P *gets shot*

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lovelybubbles04 August 1 2011, 16:51:40 UTC
haha, i knooooooow~ @.@
I moved at the pace of a snail for this chapter~ OTL
But thank you for reading and commenting on it<3333
Comments are my inspiration~ +_+

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lovelybubbles04 August 3 2011, 16:39:42 UTC
haha, yeeees,bby jae is a famous pianist -mainly famous in his country but yea, famous nevertheless.

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tftcproductions August 2 2011, 08:58:10 UTC
Yunho and his family are so nice and accepting. I don't know what that Jisun chicks problem is.
I like the slow pace. And I really like that Jaejoong is from Switzerland, that's something creative I don't read a lot.
Please update soon, I cannot wait to read more of this :)

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lovelybubbles04 August 3 2011, 16:42:16 UTC
waaaaaaaaah, I'm glad someone likes the slow pace!! :DDD
haha, I was really worried that a lot of peopl would want a ton of yunjae action right from the very beginning~ OTL

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chocolick August 2 2011, 09:33:56 UTC
*dies*
bb...;___; i can't even
you...
i'm...
you captured everything so well..!
and granny is exactly how i pictured her to be..!!
*cuddles you* ily ♥ and thank you

you did so much justice to the plot

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lovelybubbles04 August 3 2011, 16:43:30 UTC
waaaaaaaaah, haha, thank you<33333333
But do give me any pointers along the way<3
Glad you like it so far! :)
(and sorry I took such a long time to update~ OTL this is actually the longest chapter I've ever written in my entire life! x])

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it's cute and warm up my heart with the start.. thucdsp August 2 2011, 22:37:49 UTC
I'm falling in love with your story already,can not wait for the next chapter,please up date soon...
*_*

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Re: it's cute and warm up my heart with the start.. lovelybubbles04 August 3 2011, 16:45:10 UTC
awwwwwwwwww, thank you so much!!
I'm really glad you like it! <3

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