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Aug 18, 2005 23:41

I stumbled upon greatness in a world with too many parking lots. The sky was black as black can be, lying on the trunk of the car. Thank goodness the rich and tan aren't always stuck up. Sometimes they just want to jump into a shopping cart with a boy with a nice pie. Vast expanses of pavement aren't lonely at all. What I'm saying is sometimes ( Read more... )

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crystalfire328 August 19 2005, 21:33:38 UTC
Kira! I'm commenting, as I said I would. That was a really beautifull entry. It captured what's great about those nights where everything you do is completly pointless, and yet life would be just a little worse if you hadn't done it. I mean, eating a pie with chopstiks while pushing a boy in a shopping cart is something you will probably only do one time. And thats what makes it special.

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lovelygirl005 August 20 2005, 23:11:34 UTC
Have fun in New Hampshire!! I'll miss you dearly...call me the MOMENT you get home!

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five_monkeys August 21 2005, 11:12:15 UTC
I don't think I've ever told you this specifically, but... you're a pretty damn good writer.
Did you ever take a creative writing class? If you haven't, you should. If you have, you should take it again.
Take care.

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justagirl1411 August 21 2005, 17:02:28 UTC
WOW someone else who likes Sufjan Stevens, I LOVE YOU! haha

This is me just saying hi =) How's it going?

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getontheboat September 2 2005, 16:16:25 UTC
you're a poet and you don't even know it

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