i went poem crazy once again

Nov 22, 2005 18:39

i kinda wrote three new poems...well i wrote this poem then i decided to make it abstract but ya...enjoy i guess ( Read more... )

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lMAO! shes_rachael November 23 2005, 00:33:15 UTC
this is definately the highlight moment of Eleni. hahaha thats great. i feel loved. a special poem just for me :) i'm gonna post a poem on here about u. give me sum time to think of it..but i will. alsoo!! um i really like the abstract verstion better even tho they are both good. i really like ur idea for those tho. the abstract is better b/c it kinda uses metaphors and keeps u thinking whereas the 2nd verson the unabstract tells u flat out. the first one gives ur mind free places to wonder and draw ur own conclusions making it more grabbing. but i love them all.

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