FIC: On Razor's Edge - Chapter Four (2/2)

Oct 25, 2011 20:08

Title: On Razor’s Edge - Chapter 4

First half of this chapter can be found here.

Enjoy. )

characters: ensemble, verse: airmail

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senshifan October 31 2011, 21:35:04 UTC
omgosh this is so cute! i love it! i love the puppy, and Usagi, and Minako, and Takeshi, and Hiro, and Mako, and Umino, and ANDO AND REI!!!!! LOVE! THEY ARE THE MOST PERFECT YOUNG OLD PERSON COUPLE IN THE WORLD! Setsuna, however, I did not love in this one. I think I understand why she did what she did, and I'm sure Takeshi does, but she didn't have to blantly display her power in front of Ando. It's not as though she's not already a 7 feet tall, ageless, unreadable, time-wielder and senshi who could send someone back into a time they hate with a blink of her eyes, but she had to open and close doors to other dimensions with her mind, too? And belittle the man by leaving a map with x's on it? I agree. She was being a bitch.
However, I kind of think that like Ando is a bitch to everyone for their own good, I think she was, too. And Mamoru was back! I'm glad he doesn't support Takeshi, and I'm glad that Takeshi shows he feels bad finally.
I'm just glad; this is amazing as usual. You always get my props! Always.

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lovelylytton December 1 2011, 11:28:00 UTC
THEY ARE THE MOST PERFECT YOUNG OLD PERSON COUPLE IN THE WORLD!
This is one of my favourite things anyone ahs ever said about them! :)

However, I kind of think that like Ando is a bitch to everyone for their own good, I think she was, too.
Absolutely! Setsuna never does anything random, so there is definitely an agenda behind her actions, and her prime aim in life is to protect Usagi.

I'm just glad; this is amazing as usual. You always get my props! Always.
Oh yay, thank you so much! Your comment really made my day!

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I love your stories adodds122781 November 14 2011, 04:24:56 UTC
I read your stories on fan fiction and I ended up finding more stories on here and I just have to tell you I love it! I love the way you write Minako and Kunzite my two fave characters! You have a gift for writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Re: I love your stories lovelylytton December 1 2011, 11:29:28 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much!
I am horrible when it comes to updating my ffnet account, so you will find LOTS of stuff here that isn't there, simply because this is where I always post first.

I am so glad you like the way I write Minako and Kunzite; they are my favourite characters too.

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