Fic: On Razor's Edge - Interlude

Mar 28, 2012 16:00

Title: On Razor's Edge - Interlude
A/N: Many thanks to Charlie and Spirit for their help! The previous chapter is here.

Enjoy. )

characters: ensemble, verse: airmail, fandom: sailor moon

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cbrandtwright March 29 2012, 11:13:13 UTC
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamnnnn. This line here: "He had caught her with one arm while pressing a dagger to her throat with the other," might be one of the most perfect lines every created around V/K.

More interludes, now please. (Even if they are no going to have a happy ending, I'm still very compelled to keep reading!)

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lovelylytton May 2 2012, 13:25:42 UTC
I am SO happy you like this line, I am partial to it myself. :)

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dreams_of_julie March 29 2012, 21:14:12 UTC
"Now that all his companions were gone or otherwise occupied, Kunzite came to truly understand the role his brothers had in his life"

I really like the insight into Kunzite his utter devotion to Endymion his relationship with the rest of the guard and yes he'd scary but I love the way your setting up this story.

My heart id breaking with both mare and Venus and their love for these men.

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lovelylytton May 2 2012, 13:26:16 UTC
Your heart, Venus's heart, Mars's heart, and my heart too.

Thanks for commenting, Julie! :)

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adodds122781 March 30 2012, 04:10:53 UTC
Kunzite was sitting at Jadeite's desk. His gloves were off, and discarded on the table in front of him. His cape too was gone, and the top button of his uniform was open. For him, that almost constituted casual wear.

I love Kunzite's casual wear.

“So, what brings you to the room of one of my men in the middle of the night?”
For one second, Venus debated just kissing him until he forgot his question, but she knew him too well to assume he'd let her.

I think I would have thought the same thing as Venus kiss him to the point that he'll forget his question!

I'm dying to know what happened with Jadeite and Mars and I'm feeling angsty like a teenager over here.
I love your Nephrite he's so damn lovable, taking Jupiter to a forbidden paradise.

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lovelylytton May 2 2012, 13:27:52 UTC
I love Kunzite's casual wear.
He could be a GQ model. Never smiles, never a button out of place.

I'm dying to know what happened with Jadeite and Mars and I'm feeling angsty like a teenager over here.
I love your Nephrite he's so damn lovable, taking Jupiter to a forbidden paradise.
I promise this won't be the last interlude, and as such, not the last time you heard about Jadeite and the proposal and the fallout from it.

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alexandritek9 April 2 2012, 03:09:52 UTC
oh god, i entered angstville as i read this and is it a bad thing if i don't want to leave?

I love this! I love me some silver millennium, we know so little about that verse that i always enjoy how people explore that way to its downfall and yours is such an interesting and refreshing take.

Also, i need to see that back story to the mars&jadeite proposal, it's essential to my health.

I didn't think anyone could be more intense than takeshi (silly me).... and then i met your kunzite.

This is something that is so amazing about airmail, you can really see the subtle difference between their past and present lives, similar they may be but they are no longer exactly who they used to be just as takeshi is no longer the same takeshi he was before remembering his past. IT's as if they're stuck somewhere in between.Does that even make sense?

So much drama and angst! Why do you do this to us lytton? WHY?

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lovelylytton May 2 2012, 13:30:02 UTC
It's not a bad thing at all! Angstville, contrary to popular opinion, is a rather lovely place. Lots of chocolate and warm waterbottles around!

Also, i need to see that back story to the mars&jadeite proposal, it's essential to my health.
In that case, I better oblige you at some point!

This is something that is so amazing about airmail, you can really see the subtle difference between their past and present lives, similar they may be but they are no longer exactly who they used to be just as takeshi is no longer the same takeshi he was before remembering his past. IT's as if they're stuck somewhere in between.Does that even make sense?
Not only does it make sense, I think it is also a really, really nice thing of you to say. Thank you so much for your wonderfully insightful comment!

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warriorofice July 12 2012, 19:17:35 UTC
There are so many things to love about the Interlude. Your SilMil verse is fantastic, and if I didn't want more of On Razor's Edge so badly I'd ask you to write it IMMEDIATELY ( ... )

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lovelylytton July 12 2012, 19:40:56 UTC
There are so many things to love about the Interlude. Your SilMil verse is fantastic, and if I didn't want more of On Razor's Edge so badly I'd ask you to write it IMMEDIATELY.
I always wanted to write a big SilMil fic, but somehow, felt it was too daunting. So instead, I wrote a big CT fic (headdesk) with bits of SilMil thrown in for good measure. I am so glad you like the SilMil verse though, it's ridiculously fun to write.

Eeeep. Kunzite has some of the best lines in this chapter. He's positively chilling, and it breaks my heart.
Oh yay, thank you! (What a weird thing to respond to someone speaking of heartbreak, but bear with me here.)

I love Venus asking about the fire here, and how she doesn't understand it. It's a nice echo of what's going on in the present.
You picked up on that! Most excellent! Venus has no idea how the whole premonition and vision thing works, and thousands of years later, Minako still doesn't.

At some point I would love to see SilMil!Ami/Zoi as well.Duly noted, I will try to work something in! They are ( ... )

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