Fic: On Razor's Edge - Chapter 11

[lovelylytton]

Title: On Razor’s Edge - Chapter 11
Summary: Crystal Tokyo has arrived. So has Ando Tanaka.
Warnings: Oh, lots and lots of swearing. But other than that, tame.
A/N: As always, mountains of thanks to the wonderful charliechaplin2, who gently reminds me that this tale is to be continued. In that sense, consider this the tick tick tick before the boom.

Comments

[mrcrybrilliance]

Coherency is failing me, but brava! I will try to write more coherent review, but this was powerful and I kinda hurt right now from reading it. <3

[lovelylytton]

Thank you thank you thank you!

[charliechaplin2]

[lovelylytton]

ORE is always missing you too.

[starr_gala55]

When's the next chapter 'cause I've missed you soo much. I can't wait to see what happens next, and how the Wiseman is going to strike. I would not cry if Takeshi and Minako never got back together 'cause she deserves better and I hope someone comes along who helps her see that.

[lovelylytton]

New chapters have finally been uploaded, many apologies for the delay! I'm very happy you enjoy this tale so much!

[apsaraqueen]

*incoherent*

*will respond with full sentences at a later date*

[lovelylytton]

I do love your incoherence!

[homicidalglare]

OH MY GODDD

Where to even starttt
LOL Usagi, Rei, and Hiro. TOTES ADORBS.

Ahhhh Takeshi and Setsuna kills me. TOTALLY KILLS ME. MINAKO BABY HOW DO YOU EVEN. Tear my heart into 2 again. :( And shittt, marriage??? Sisters before misters, Setsuna. Gonna have to agree with Ando for a little bit here.. and not just because i'm in the Ando Fanclub. Please please redeem yourself. I wanna like you.

Which brings me to ANDO AND UMINO <3. My favorite part about this because it doesn't fill me with dread and despair. I want an Ando to appear before me and magically procure food. T'would be amazeballs. I don't think I have Umino's appetite so I'm much easier to please haha.

But fuck, the contrasted interaction between Anino/Umido and Takeshi/Minako WAHHHHH. It started a little sweet with the umbrella thing, but damn it, I let myself be tricked for a second..and then the shit hits the fan.

Thanks for figuratively punching me in the gut. Glad you're back!

[lovelylytton]

Thank you thank you thank you so much for your utterly lovely comment! It is much appreciated and I am woefully sorry for the delay in replying and writing the next chapter!