Fic: On Razor's Edge - Chapter 13

[lovelylytton]

Title: On Razor’s Edge - Chapter 13
Summary: Crystal Tokyo has arrived. So has Ando Tanaka.
Warnings: This one is intense. Swearing, violence, some of it more graphic than the rest. All warnings apply, rated R to NC-17.
A/N: As always, thanks to the amazing Charlie for her editorial and personal support. You’re a sweetheart! And to darling Spirit,

Comments

[galaxylily]

AHHH! Why did I see this right before I need to leeeeeeeaaaaavvveeee!! I'll read this FIRST THING when I get home tonight. SO EXCITED.

[lovelylytton]

Thank you! Hope you enjoyed it! :)

[cbrandtwright]

Loveanddutyandloveandduty.

Masterfully written. It's so rare to see this part of the story - I love it.

And for some reason, this is the line that sticks with me, " She was a fighter, but not a warrior." Like, I want to write stuff based on this line.

[lovelylytton]

Aww, thank you! Ccurrently writing the next chapter, and man, love and duty indeed. The content, not the writing, obviously. Also, your userpic? Perfection.

[kurai_kiryu]

OMG the hell is breaking loose.
I hope everything ends well.

[lovelylytton]

It is indeed!
(And as for everything ending well -- that is entirely a question of how one defines "well" ;) )

[galaxylily]

....So....Holy Shit.

What. Even. So much chaos. So great.

Such a disturbing lack of a certain character.

::whimper::

[lovelylytton]

Thank you, Lily!
And yes, lack of a certain character indeed... very deliberately so...

[sugarcross]

This part is too short, and what a way to end it!

For a few chapters I stopped caring for Takeshi after his hookup with Setsuna, but this part might just have redeemed him since he actually mourned Attila. So he /does/ have a soft side, after all.

WHYYY did you kill Ace just like that?! I'd have liked it better if he had more evil plans and manipulated Minako some. The death sentence dealt him is too merciful!

You might have broken my heart again with no Mako and kiddies cameo in this part :'(

[lovelylytton]

Thank you, Elena! Don't give up on Takeshi yet, he's a poor tall, tie-wearing mite!