Fic: On Razor's Edge - Chapter 15

[lovelylytton]

Title: On Razor’s Edge - Chapter 15
Summary: Crystal Tokyo has arrived. So has Ando Tanaka.
Warnings: In Ellorgast’s words; all the tears.
A/N: Thanks to my darling Charlie and her neverending optimism, encouragement and beta services. All mistakes are mine because quite clearly, and as no surprise to anyone, that girl is perfect.

Comments

[apsaraqueen]

I'm on vacation and my Internet is terrible, so I must be brief: this chapter was all things wonderful and terrible (werriful?) at once, and as usual, I am utterly blown away by your agonizing buildup, your careful plotting that has led us to (and hopefully through) this catastrophic series of events, and of course your deft handling of the characters (particularly Minako - the scene with her and Mamoru was especially fantastic!) and their emotions along the way. Loved this.

[lovelylytton]

I hope the vacation was brilliant! (Honeymoon?)

Thank you for all the wonderful things you said -- I'm quite partial to the Mamoru & Minako scene too, especially after I realised that I so rarely write them together. :)

[cbrandtwright]

Gah! Another powerful chapter! (Write another one very soon). :p

Still - this resonated with me (because I can totally picture it):

“Setsuna,” Minako cut across her, anger blazing in her eyes, “this is all hands on deck. We’re three active senshi short, so you’ll have to leave your precious pedestal of temporal and spatial isolation and do. what. you’re. told. Which, by the way, includes calling Hotaru. We need her here.”

Precious pedestal indeed.

[lovelylytton]

Thank you, international traveller queen!

[dreams_of_julie]

So addicted to this story. More please soon!

[lovelylytton]

Will try!

[charliechaplin2]

The crystals functioned as guardians… but whether it was a tomb or a sanctuary they guarded, he could not tell.

It was at about this point that I lost it. And I have read this already, like twice. AND I STILL LOST IT. I happened to have a pillow within my grasp and I am so glad I did, because it gave me something to clutch very tightly.

For once in his life, Ando knew to shut up and listen.

Oooooh, Ando...

By drawing on the powers of the volcano while Rei was trying to tame it, he’d unleashed more fire than even she could handle. I am not kidding, by eyes felt all sting-y and pinprick-y because there were actual tears threatening to spill

[lovelylytton]

Oh you wonderful creature, you! I can't believe you left this huge a comment after helping me put this thing together in the first place. You darling!