Wow, what a great story. Loved the way you switched between the now and parts of the past, showing how they got to the point they are at now. beatifully written and the perfect happy ending, with saying I love you and the desicion to finally go public with the relationship. thanks for sharing hun <333
this has the most wonderful, natural, easy progression. there was just enough angst over them being unwilling to give voice to their true feelings, but it was always tempered with a feeling of love.
there's a gentleness that surrounds this whole fic that captured me from the beginning and made me feel good reading it.
Thank you so much! GURL I seriously LOVE your comments!!!
When I started writing this fic I had no idea where it would lead me, but I had this quiet feeling of love. What you just put in this comment is pretty much exactly what I was feeling and I'm so happy I was able to make that come across.
Oh I love the sweetness in this fic! Your characterization is so good. Tommy being such a deep thinker, which I think many people don't realize about him, he observes and plans. Adam always analyzing and verbalizing his worries but waiting for the right moments to say what he truly feels, then agonizing over whether his words were okay and had the right effect.
I LOVE details and your dialogue and descriptions were perfectly included in the story.
And that pic of Tommy on your background is distracting me so much I can't think of anything else to say, other than that I loved this fic! :)
Aww I'm happy you see him that way too. There's so much more to that man than his obvious talent and good looks. Adam, well Adam is Adam and that's exactly what makes him so presh.
*blushes deeply* Thank you.
Hehe, I know right?
*hugs* I'm so happy about this comment I can't even... Thank you!
Oh I have loved reading this story. The raw emotions so laid bare was just like reading Adams diary. That he is whispering to a sleeping Tommy is just the most precious setting. I especially loved the talk Adam has with Dia that answers a lot of his unasked questions. Huh... Boys and their secret fears. TRUELY beautiful.. And hot sexy too. Thank you so much
It kinda is like reading his diary, huh never thought of that before. Yeah I heard this song on the radio and the image was just there. Calm and beautiful.
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I'm happy you like it. Yeah, it especially took Adam some time to let his guard down..
Thank you for reading it bb. <33333
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I will go and friend you, if that's ok. I'm VoodooDoll70 from Twitter.
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LOL I know bb, and I friended you back. :*
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there's a gentleness that surrounds this whole fic that captured me from the beginning and made me feel good reading it.
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When I started writing this fic I had no idea where it would lead me, but I had this quiet feeling of love. What you just put in this comment is pretty much exactly what I was feeling and I'm so happy I was able to make that come across.
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I LOVE details and your dialogue and descriptions were perfectly included in the story.
And that pic of Tommy on your background is distracting me so much I can't think of anything else to say, other than that I loved this fic! :)
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Aww I'm happy you see him that way too. There's so much more to that man than his obvious talent and good looks.
Adam, well Adam is Adam and that's exactly what makes him so presh.
*blushes deeply* Thank you.
Hehe, I know right?
*hugs* I'm so happy about this comment I can't even... Thank you!
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TRUELY beautiful.. And hot sexy too. Thank you so much
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Yeah BOYS!! /o\
Thank you so much. <333
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