Darkfic: it's good for the soul. Or, you know, not.

[lover_of_slash]

My first stab at writing Tom. It seems this was a month for exploration. In this month I've tried a new poetry style, a new writing style, and I've taken a stab at two charaters I've never written before. I'm a little proud of it all :)

Title: Easy to Blame the Dark

Comments

[lover_of_slash]

Thanks so much. I really appreciate the help and comments! <3

[violetfishy]

Very dark.
I loved the end, I really felt how twisted up inside he is.

“You haven’t seen the best of it,” He says, “Just wait.”
- there is something about this line. So creepy, so true. *shivers*

[lover_of_slash]

I have an affinity for darkfic. Especially when dealing with naturally dark characters.

YES. That's what I was going for. We know how he turns out and the damage he does. I'm so glad that it showed through.

Thank you for the lovely feedback.

[lover_of_slash]

I'm glad! Well, my piece grew from this line: "He paints his face white to avoid looking at the darkness within." Which popped into my head while I was leaving the review for your piece. And that wouldn't bore me at all- I love hearing what people have to say.

Thank you :)

[ink_smear]

Goo. That was good. Very creepy as everyone else has said, but good. The imagery was my favourite part. Lines like It was a lipsticked mouth begging for a kiss. that really caught me. Wonderful work.

Andddd, I hate to bother you about this again, but people are continuously asking for Pansy over at Early Thaw and I just wanted to know if you're still interested in playing her? The rpg started early, so it has been running for about a week now. We have almost 30 characters. It's great and I'd love for you to play Pansy, I just need to know when/if you can get an application in. Thanks hun!

[lover_of_slash]

Thank you. And that's my favorite line. I have a special place in my heart for imagery. I love reading it as much as I like writing it.

I'm really sorry. I took the time to fill out the application but then my computer erased it and I haven't had time since then. Go ahead and give the character away because I don't know when I'll be able to fill it out again.

[spessartine]

Ee, thank you so much darling! ♥

They’re too wild too mesmerizing ... And she was his crucifix.

My favourite lines, along with the little bombs - that seemed so appropriate. So subtly chilling and just.. yum. Poor Tom, what a pretty little nutter he is. Great writing, as usual.

[lover_of_slash]

Yeah, he's definitely a nutter. Then again...that's why I'm drawn to him.

Thank you for the wonderful feedback.