New Poem: Little Lost Girl

[loversstare]

PLEASE tell me what you think

Comments

[herbiepens410]

Impressive! There's an obvious sense of tone and mood, but it's almost inquisitive instead of straight-up depressing. I also like the way you cut down the lines as if cutting into the core of the little lost girl... excellent job, my dear! Many hugs!

[arianacrow]

I really liked it. I agree with what herbiepens said about cutting into the core of the little lost girl, good imagery.

[sakuchan]

i wish i could write poetry that wasnt like...

look at spot run,
run spot run. Good job hun:-)

[loversstare]

Thanks for input guys! Loved you specific comments Karen!!! More comments are appreciated! lol. Glad to see this poem is being so well received.