Blind Justice chapter 1

Aug 13, 2011 03:08

Chapter 1 )

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peppervl August 13 2011, 10:29:07 UTC
I think you may have missed a closing italics tag somewhere...

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loverstar August 13 2011, 10:36:17 UTC
I'm too tired and no longer care lol I have it posted at ao3 it's better to read it there.

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moorspede August 13 2011, 21:45:49 UTC
I can't find it at A03 :o(

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tmn1966 September 8 2011, 18:55:31 UTC
Gosh, I'm sorry I didn't read this before now! Well, because of my work schedule, it's going to take me a few days to read it all - but I'm definitely intrigued and can't wait to find out what's going to happen next!

I like the beginning, pulled me in right away, of course wanting to know everything right the fuck now. LOL

Some of my favorite parts of this chapter:

“Jensen’s funeral was the last-that was the very last time I ever stepped foot in a church. I couldn’t stand the thought of facing God alone,” he says softly, afraid he’s breaking some rule by speaking his late husband’s name out loud.

And I really love this one:

Sometimes he just wants a more exciting life, to solve something bigger than him for once, to live on the edge.

And this:

She was solace in the form of a friend.

Wish I didn't have to stop reading now -- stupid work! ;)

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loverstar September 8 2011, 19:16:22 UTC
Thank u I'm glad u like! I'm writing a sequel and also writing a different story.

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confuzed September 26 2011, 16:51:49 UTC
This is so great! SVU is one of my favorite series to watch and read fanfic of as well. I am very intrigued so far...and wondering what was Alexis doing in New York??

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loverstar September 26 2011, 16:59:56 UTC
Thanks so MUCH! keep reading and find out!

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