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[SGA] Luckenbach, Texas

Feb 22, 2008 15:35

Title: Luckenbach, Texas
Gen: Caldwell, Ford, Lorne, McKay
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1300
Summary: The new Daedalus personnel have a lot to learn -- not only about Atlantis, but about themselves.
Notes: Written for sga-flashfic's school challenge. Many thanks to miriam for the beta and the waffles.
Originally Posted: November 26, 2005

( The most important thing Caldwell learns is that he will always want the one woman he can't have. )

sga: gen

Comments 2

janeaverage November 22 2010, 19:35:49 UTC

The first time or twelve I read this, I didn't comment because I had no idea how to express ... what I clearly still don't have an idea how to express xD I love it, though. It's such a tease, with these little hints that make me want to read a ten-thousand-word story for every section, but it still manages to be satisfying.

paradise_city December 2 2010, 18:13:49 UTC

Thanks so much for the feedback. I was really intrigued by all the people we didn't see on the show, and I'm glad that idea worked for you. :)