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[lovesrenton]

expectations are shattered by rains of dissapointent. lost in clouds of anguish, a little girl wrapped in hate. why try to please her? she will only draw you deeper into crime and all her murderous tendencies. filled with rage that does consume her, she climbs to highest steeple, looks down at all the war and laps it up like buttermilk. in all her

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[savethesprites]

um
i hate you
i loathe you
and your bloody fucking amazingly good writing
thats it
im through.

[lovesrenton]

beh. yours eats mine for supper.

[preludesh]

that girls sounds like a down ass chick.....

[lovesrenton]

she hates life. she's a hard-ass murderer.

[preludesh]

i think shes just a little confused..

shes just stuck in this world of confusion.
and there wasnt a drug that she wasnt abusin'.
cuz she was just trying to get away from this life.
this life when she was little she dreamed everything would eventually be alrite.
cuz she knew she was one of god's children
but when she got to that age she did what she had to do.
first she started hangin with the dealers dealin.
than shit got worse.
and she was hangin with the killers and killin.
now she doesnt consider herself one of gods children.
so now shes just a strate up villain.

[lovesrenton]

something along those lines.

[plunkcherry14]

good writing ^
my writing sucks.
ur writing amazes me.

[lovesrenton]

yours is lovely. mine is ridiculus.

[savethesprites]

screw you caitlin almond.

[lovesrenton]

i suppose i'll take that as a compliment.