I just got home from madrigal retreat and I'm feeling quite awake. I got your reply to my post, and I would like to reply to yours now! I am honored you think I may be as deep or deeper than you. You certainly fascinate me with your analogies and metaphors. I can't even tell you how beautifully your writing flows. I am beyond jealous
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The Funeral
A black veil falls, my weeping to conceal
From within, notes join to form mournful song
What takes place in the mind is no less real
Ceremony to honor dreams long gone
The memories of hope are bittersweet
To taste their joy again's forbidden fruit
They sustained me; I never faced defeat
For lofty dreams there is no substitute
But reminders of logic beat me down
A tyranny of pragmatism wins
Logic revels in undeserved renown
And at the dying breath of dreams, it grins
Now i peer into the casket to see
All my aspirations, the life of me.
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