Beyond Mediocrity

Dec 11, 2005 20:56

Oh no, not another
melodramatic teen poem
"life sucks, i'm bored"
No, I want to
grab life
and wring out
the little disappointments
that stain it
The reason I try so hard
Is not to make a fool out of you
I just don't want to disappoint myself
It's like they say
You're your own worst enemy
Your own worst critic
I'm trying to use my faults
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nattosoup December 12 2005, 03:01:47 UTC
Haha, i hope this wasnt
inspired by my own melodramatic
self pity spewed across
a computer screen, oh woe is
me, how embarassing if it is.

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lovlifyori December 12 2005, 22:09:58 UTC
Oh it was
I borrowed
the style
hope you don't mind
it seemed to fit
what i was feeling
at the moment
you should be proud.

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nattosoup December 13 2005, 00:10:21 UTC
I was hoping it wasnt
as my style is usually
full of self pity, i
write this way because i
am too lazy to rhyme,
so i call it a modified
haiku and hope that people
are too stupid to know the
difference.

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