I was wondering if you'd just dropped off the face of the Internet or something. I've been trying to catch you on MSN but I haven't seen you on. I have some files you might want. (bwahaha mysterious)
Yeah, I figured as much. Well... on a day off or something try to pop on MSN and check if I'm around? As I say, you may be interested in what I have to send to you.
Also I suppose I should mention the poem in your post. It's interesting; it's got elements of a concrete poem in there. The way you jump columns give it an interesting temporal spacing when you read it. It'd really lose its effect if you read it out loud. It's like taking a poem and making it into a visual art form (like, as I said, a concrete poem). Not necessarily a bad thing though! I'm primarily a visual artist, after all. It does sound kind of stream of thoughtish, and honestly I think the novelty of the column jumping has actually made me forget almost entirely what the poem was about. Hrm. I'll reread it.
In any case, MSN me, and keep creating things. You'll be happier in the end.
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Also I suppose I should mention the poem in your post. It's interesting; it's got elements of a concrete poem in there. The way you jump columns give it an interesting temporal spacing when you read it. It'd really lose its effect if you read it out loud. It's like taking a poem and making it into a visual art form (like, as I said, a concrete poem). Not necessarily a bad thing though! I'm primarily a visual artist, after all. It does sound kind of stream of thoughtish, and honestly I think the novelty of the column jumping has actually made me forget almost entirely what the poem was about. Hrm. I'll reread it.
In any case, MSN me, and keep creating things. You'll be happier in the end.
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Excellent work with the structure. Amazing flow - it wasn't at all hard to follow the sentences.
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And I'm not sure if that last bit was sarcastic or not :P
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