I'm Not - Chapter 8: Calling

[lowlyfruit]

I'm sorry! D: It's always like this, huh?

I'm leaving for a while, but I wanted to post some stuff before that. This chapter was a little rushed, I'm not even sure if the story is understandable. *shot*

Well, please check it out anyway! :D Comments are loved, ne. ♥ Highly loved ne. XD

“Stop that.”

Nino looked back at the guy with a

Comments

[lowlyfruit]

Thank you! C:
The ending had more, but I ran out of gas and just kept it as it was. XD
Thanks for stopping by! (?) XDD

[deeya_ohmiya]

I like the game, it fits with Ohmiya behavior during their tv program (^_^)..
I think I kind of understand the ending part as Nino still not completely remove his hypnotism over Ohno in chapter 1, right? So it makes sense to me XD

Can't wait to know what will happen next (^_^)..

[lowlyfruit]

Ah, exactly. XD
I would have put that in, if not for the loss of any good ideas to connect to that explanation, so I left the ending a cliffhanger. XD
The game was kind of easy to come up with. Well, I didn't really come up with anything, since Ohmiya is already like that, so I just explained some random rules. XD
Thanks for reading and commenting! C: ♥

[zazasukie]

Nino is still controlling Ohno? So he was aware that Riida was still under the effects of his hypnosis? *____*
Update soon!

[lowlyfruit]

...Yes? XDD I think so. I... yeah. *dies*
Well, yes. I'll make it clearer in the next chapter! o.o
When Ohno was asleep on the couch after the Chinen scene, Nino said, “You thought I didn't hear you? Screaming and crying while you were sleeping.” That line is the start of the paragraph that kinda says that Nino knows his troubles. D:
I'll make it clearer next chapter! ,:D
Thanks for reading and commenting!! ♥

[hippiefox]

ahhh bad nino... so he's still controlling him...
if ohno does wake up, then he won't remember how he loves nino, right??? D:
where are you going?? don't be gone for too long! ^^

[lowlyfruit]

I'll just be going to the province, that's all. It's only about a week, so just think of it as I'm just too lazy to update early. XDD
Yes, the brat is still controlling Ohno. XD He knows too. 8D
About Ohno waking up, I really can't say. I haven't thought about it. *shot, dies* Hmm, something happens to Ohno that will kinda put him in danger. XD
Thanks for reading! ♥

[hippiefox]

ahh okay, not too long ^^ but i'll miss you when i post the next chapter!! D: but on the good side, you'll have two to read when you get back! :D

nino is always in control in my mind... but i think ohno is also one step ahead of nino (on accident, of course) xD
danger!? ahh... now you got me more anxious, but i will wait patiently.
have fun and have a safe travel ^^

[lowlyfruit]

Thanks! C:
Two chapters, huh? If I read them both too quickly, I bet I'll be dehydrated by the time I finish. (damn tears just can't stay in when I read your fics) XD
Yes, danger. Somehow. :] It involves his mind and maybe some forgetting. XD

[ninachan123]

ahh!!!
cliffhanger!!!
i love the game!!! :D
can't wait for the next chapter!!!

[lowlyfruit]

Yes, I am evil for cliffhanging. XD *malevolent laugh* *dies*
The game was a piece of cake to do, since Ohmiya were already playing it anyway. (in my mind, at least)
Thank you for reading! Next chapter during the weekend! :D