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Fic: Love Is Not All, 2/2

Aug 18, 2008 12:43

Title:Love Is Not All (2/2)
Author: lpmufinfiend
Pairing: Rose, AltTen
Rating: R/NC-17?
Word Count: 2278
Spoilers: through Journey's End
Summary: The promised installment of smut. My first ever truly dirty bit of writing, so be kind!

( step into the boudoir... )

Comments 2

wiggiemomsi August 19 2008, 02:38:39 UTC

I just read you over at Teaspoon and bounced back to LJ, to also post here.

No, NOT smut. I know smut; THIS is erotica! Beautiful phrasing, beautifully presented.

A favorite bit:
"Neither spoke as the electricity faded, replaced in measure by an unhurried warmth that seeped in, binding them together in complex, irrefutable ways. In the moments many versions of himself would have taken to retreat, to find distance from the potent spell of impermanent, human connection, he found himself holding tighter-- curling closer into his Rose, their scent, their situation."

Incredibly beautiful wording to describe the difference between the Doctor as he was in many past incarnations and the half-human Doctor as he is now, responding in human ways to loving Rose.

Seriously ... please consider writing a series of Doctor Who/Rose stories. They would undoubtedly be very, very successful. Heck, I'd buy any book you wrote, Doctor Who or not!

Now ... MORE, please?

*Hugs*

lpmufinfiend August 19 2008, 03:21:05 UTC

i responded over at Teaspoon, and shall relay my thanks here.

Thank you so, so, so much. Such praise as this makes me feel all warm and fuzzy and capable of going the distance. Which usually roughly translates to me taking my confidence into my corner of imagining and writing more fic for y'all to read :)