A lesson....

Dec 17, 2009 23:33

One thing was for sure, a lesson was learned that day. A lesson that needed to be taught, a lesson that need to be understood. A lesson for all the forms of the entity Exodus, that failure to serve would not be tolerated.

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Major Headspace FOIP beneath the cut. )

headspace, last lines, first line challenge, aziraphel

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misscathryn December 17 2009, 23:46:57 UTC
:) Loved it, Aziraphel is one rather scary Eidolon and I cant wait to Rp with it again.

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estantia December 17 2009, 23:50:34 UTC
Very well done sir, haunting and slightly disturbing but works very well, particularly where you can see how wide ranging it all is and then it zooms down to this little smiling grey wemic proclaiming they're of the Spider. That is really quite sinister.

As said before Bloody hell that's good. and that tone of voice is not one I use lightly...

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loopymushroom December 18 2009, 00:09:10 UTC
Yeeee! Brilliant, very chilling. Although, sadface, I liked the Marquis :(

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knightclubber December 18 2009, 13:58:31 UTC
Exactly my reaction. You can't go around killing your personalities because they become too interesting- it will lead to much less fun for all.

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24_hour_techie December 19 2009, 11:48:20 UTC
Oh he's not....dead...just away for a while.

He will be back when he has learned his lesson. ;)

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fyrheafoc December 18 2009, 00:18:13 UTC
I love it! awesomely done.

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