Coin Trade
A little elf made a trade with me
In the night, perhaps in a dream:
A gold coin for my destiny.
But thinking that it was a dream
I grinned and gave it away.
The elf was gone the next I looked;
Where he stood, the gold coin lay.
I picked it up and cursed the crook
And to waking I slowly went,
But I felt bad that the trade was done
And my riches were almost ( Read more... )
In the night, perhaps in a dream:
A gold coin for my destiny.
But thinking that it was a dream
I grinned and gave it away.
The elf was gone the next I looked;
Where he stood, the gold coin lay.
I picked it up and cursed the crook
And to waking I slowly went,
But I felt bad that the trade was done
And my riches were almost ( Read more... )
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Iba talaga siya sa karamihan ng emo-poetry BS na dime-a-dozen ngayon sa deviantart. Nandun ung intelligence ng pagkakasulat, pero at the same time mafi-feel mo ung honesty ung feelings ng writer =b Puro positive pa mostly yung ideas mo, which IMO makes it worth 90% above the rest XDXDXD
(Adam Sessler voice) I GIVE IT A 5 OUT OF 5
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Still think I could've done more with this piece, though. Maybe in the next ones.
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