Comments | lsjcandy: and at last i see the light -- I

lsjcandy

and at last i see the light -- I

Jun 20, 2011 22:37

So, I guess the drabble-series-thing is contagious or something. As you probably know, audreyii_fic and lilabut have written and are still writing amazing drabbles. I started out with one, planning on some fluff in these dark times, but that one needed an outtake, and it also needed a sequel because the Tangled music made me. So, I'm not planning on many parts, ( Read more... )

jacob/bella, bella swan, fanfiction

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amaggiepie June 20 2011, 20:54:15 UTC

Ok, so this so freakin creepy.

I wrote THIS SCENE about a month ago before I got writer's block on You Smell Like Home, and I just recently figured out it's going to be the beginning of Chapter 4.

Just so you know, and don't think like, plagarized you and shit.

O.o

lsjcandy June 21 2011, 07:30:06 UTC

That's just... okay. I'm actually the one plagarising, but yeah, we both didn't know :p

amaggiepie June 21 2011, 13:08:38 UTC

This definately isn't the first time this has happened to us. WTF? We must be on the same wavelength or something ;) Now I want to send what I have to you so you can be just as thoroughly creeped out by the similarities.

lsjcandy June 21 2011, 15:14:25 UTC

DO IT :D I won't mind, I'm already creeped out, ahah.

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willow2883 June 20 2011, 21:11:25 UTC

Aw, that was cute.
Who the heck takes cold showers? Oh, right, vampire lovers. Brrr.
“You’re gorgeous, Bells. Absolutely, perfectly gorgeous.”
That was sweet. Mortifying, but sweet!
Glad Bella is hanging out with friends.

lsjcandy June 21 2011, 07:31:36 UTC

Thank you :3 Yeah, Bella's crazy but that's a part of her.
Sometimes, things need to be confessed. And I needed this for her ego :p
Yep, they can't be bitches. SM was just isolating Bella a little too much.

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lsjcandy June 21 2011, 07:34:23 UTC

Triple awkwardness when you know you have feelings for each other xd
Yeah, it's the thing that bothers me a lot, I've also given a simple but real reason for her self-esteem issues in part II of this thing :p
They're so nice and short and fun to write!

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lsjcandy June 21 2011, 09:31:30 UTC

And her having a "good day" in front of the mirror seemed like she finally turns to normal human behaviour.
Yup, never liked her constant negativity, she deserves some self-love.

'Cuz I'm writing her yay :D

I visualise his face if he knew... xD

I thought of sparing Bella and using the towel to cover her up... but that but take away the fun.

exquisite_ugly June 21 2011, 10:38:35 UTC

That was great, hun! I really enjoyed this drabble. Love the idea of cold, now hot, showers as she adjusts to the right kind of life. The way she appreciated herself... and Jake appreciating her. That line was so sweet. Nice work :)

lsjcandy June 21 2011, 15:15:18 UTC

Thank you :3 She just needs to learn to love herself, bit by bit.
And well, Jake could teach her, right?