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[lskd]

We used to dance all the time. Even when we had other things to do. I remember your vivid face in front of me. Holding me to our set pace with those bright eyes. I also remember the times your eyes were asking if we could slow down. Yes, it was a never ending adventure back then. Time never touched us there.

-k

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[exanimus_sol]

I know this is a ways back but I just wanted to tell you that this was probably one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. When I read it for the first time it brought tears to eyes. Thank you for reminding me that while time goes by I can't forget the feelings that brought me to where I am today. It also reminds me that while we have things to do sometimes we need to take time out for the people we are neglecting and remind them we care. Floods of feelings come from this small passage: some I can't explain and some I'd rather keep to myself because they remain more precious that way. Thank you again...

[lskd]

Thanks for such a great comment. I have a happyness because I was able to share this.
-Akoni

[exanimus_sol]

Your very welcome