Fic - When He Touches Her John/Teyla PG-13

[ltcoljsheppard]

 
Title: When He Touches Her

Author: ltcoljsheppard          Email: ltcoljsheppard@yahoo.com

Pairing: Teyla/John

Rating: PG-13

Word count: 3799

Summary: Answer to a fic prompt for the Characters of Color ficathon challenge - 
Feb 9 - Stargate Atlantis, Teyla/John: washing the other's hair - passionate

Disclaimer - Don't own them or anything to do

Comments

[johnsheppardluv]

hey there, lcjs!!! :) i too love sheppard & (reading & writing) sheppard fic! :) loved all your fics loike whoaaa, particularly this one and the one about Shep's military backstory! awesome work! "Stringbean" is definitely an appropriate callsign fore shep as well...& for those reasons, i decided to friend you. ;) Hope you don't mind! ~hopefully, a new pal, Sharma

[ltcoljsheppard]

I don't mind at all Sharma. Can never have too many friends. I'm glad you enjoyed those. They are two of my favorites as well. Shep's backstory will be about 10 parts, each one spotlighting a different significant event in his career that will show us a bit of what moulded him into the man we love to follow to Atlantis. Thanks very much for the feedback! - JS

[johnsheppardluv]

YAY! i agree tho. friends are very cool things to have. 10 Parts!?! Holy cow & Awesomesauce! Now, I DEFINTELY can't wait to see wat else you come up with, dude. No problemo about the feedback either, dude. i love giving it! ('cuz doing it not is fun but it makes me feel like i have a purpose in life too...) ;) Thanks for friending me back tho. :) ~Sharma

[ltcoljsheppard]

LOLOL Awesomesauce? Now that's one I've never heard, but I like it, it made me chuckle. But yes, Shep's backstory was/is intended to be at least 10 parts (12 if needs be)And I'm glad you're enjoying them. - JS

[vball2003_1999]

I just found your fics and wanted to let you know that I love them. I think you portray John so accuratly, especially in this one. I'm going to keep reading, because they are really great!

[ltcoljsheppard]

Well thank you very much, Vball2003. I really appreciate that and thanks for taking the time to leave feedback. This makes my day. - JS

[yappichick]

Great story! And the kiss *contented sigh* Now...I could have done without the Keller interruption, I'm sure John could too. :D :D :D

Excellent job!

[ltcoljsheppard]

Thanks Yappichick, I'm glad you liked it. This one is one of my favorites too, I'm just really pleased with the way it came out from start to finish. Thanks so much for the feedback, it's really appreciated.

Oh, and I had to have them interrupted or it would've gone "too far" and I didn't want to lose the deeper meaning behind yet another "slip" of showing their true feelings for one another... and nobody stammers as skillfully as Jennifer Keller. *grins* Thanks again. - JS

[camshaft22]

This is very well written. Good job as per your usual. *Grins*