Comments | lts29: Good Times For A Change (Inception Fic)

lts29

Good Times For A Change (Inception Fic)

Aug 14, 2010 15:38

Arthur had been plagued with nightmares for years as a child. Waking up in the middle of the night, sweating like he had run a marathon, he had never understood what caused them. His home life was normal enough, he supposed. His mother stayed home; his father was a hard-working man. “A place for everything and everything in its place” was the ( Read more... )

arthur/ariadne, fandom razzmatazz

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with_redribbons August 14 2010, 20:49:32 UTC

I love the ending. It makes me all kinds of happy.

lts29 August 14 2010, 20:52:37 UTC

thank you! and thank you for your help with it.

with_redribbons August 14 2010, 21:02:28 UTC

Anytime. Thanks for letting me read it!

lts29 August 14 2010, 21:03:48 UTC

buried_alive55 August 14 2010, 21:37:59 UTC

I loved it! I liked how the dreams showed his feelings about her as she went from being someone he's just physically attracted to someone he's starting to genuinely like and care about. The ending was so sweet :)

lts29 August 14 2010, 21:39:15 UTC

thank you so much, love! I'm really glad you liked it. :D

levitatethis August 14 2010, 22:03:43 UTC

I really like the idea behind this story -- dreams going from a patchwork quilt of subconscious ideas to revealing much more real wants, desires, needs. I like their reactions when Ariadne goes into his dream and sees what's been going through his mind. She's conflicted because even though it's only been dreams they've been physical in, it's still something of her that he's been exploring in his own mind for quite awhile...and I like that he's a tad embarrassed and unnerved but also wanting that something more to still happen.

The set up to them eventualy getting together is nicely paced and you flesh out the world a bit more by bringing the team into it

Very touching end.

lts29 August 14 2010, 22:06:36 UTC

thank you very much! I wanted to explore what Arthur would dream about a bit and how his subconscious would deal with Ariadne.

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading it. :)

smileb0x August 14 2010, 22:10:46 UTC

wooo finally finished, and my oh my I loved the ending. aha cute : )
& I loved the part where he got caught xD.
nice work!

lts29 August 14 2010, 22:11:19 UTC

thank you very much!

makingmywayhome August 15 2010, 02:09:08 UTC

This is THE BEST A/A O/S OF ALL TIME.

“Let me take care of you.”

“Do you really want to?”

Legit tears in my eyes.

<3333

lts29 August 15 2010, 02:51:46 UTC

really?? thanks, love. <3

I'm really happy that you liked it.