Comments | lubzyou: I Doubt that the Doctors Are Wrong

lubzyou

I Doubt that the Doctors Are Wrong

Jul 09, 2011 15:02

Pairing: het!2Min
Genre: angst? At any rate, it’s not uplifting
Rating: PG
Length: Drabble

( “As the note dipped... )

fanfic, het!2min, drabble, angst, girl!taemin

Comments 15

Spot for Aqsa lubzyou July 9 2011, 19:04:34 UTC

Because she is lovely and always saves me a spot.

Wow. Just... Wow. bollywoodrecord July 9 2011, 22:00:24 UTC

I'm speechless, which I feel is a bad thing because each and every fic I write, you have such a wonderful comment for. Which is why it's really hard to summon words for this piece. It's so... So beautiful.

I have never read het!2min before, and I was actually expecting this to be a Minho/Taemin!boyxboy, but this was even better.

He feels nothing but unadulterated, boiling, acidic anger.

It's times like these where you think, Minho isn't anything but happy. He's too full of himself and arrogant and so well-rounded and his smile is so beautiful that to see him... Mad, in any form, is just horrible. Horrible, horrible, horrible.

he woke up next to her as she supported her head on one hand and drew indistinct, unending patterns on his chest with her other hand.

This is beauty written in a sentence right here, sister. Right here.

Minho will be beside Taeyeon forever.AH I WANT TO CRY!!!! Gosh. The first thing I've ever read of yours and I already want to bawl. I know this is female Taemin, but is it okay that I actually imagine ( ... )

Re: Wow. Just... Wow. lubzyou July 9 2011, 22:57:38 UTC

Even though you were speechless at first, I appreciate you continuing with this comment. It is almost as long as my drabble.
/barrels you over with a hug

I'm touched that you think so highly of my work. I find it hard to think of Minho as someone who would take being helpless in stride. I imagine it would make him quite angry.

This is beauty written in a sentence right here, sister. Right here.
:P I love a little bit of ghetto in my comments, thank you quuuuuurl.

I will keep writing if I don't discourage myself.

This is the sweetest comment, you beautiful girl, thank you for reading!

Re: Wow. Just... Wow. lubzyou July 9 2011, 23:18:17 UTC

I just noticed you said, Taecyeon! I guess that is good too...he's just and intimidating beast, compared to little Taeyeon. XD You do what you want. d.b

I will read your newest fic after I get back tonight.

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maxism12 July 10 2011, 07:59:38 UTC

hi i spot here

maxism12 July 10 2011, 09:17:07 UTC

OMG this is so heart wrenching and sad but hopeful, very well written :) ♥

lubzyou July 10 2011, 13:56:41 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me.

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

maxism12 July 10 2011, 14:02:37 UTC

but you precious thing, why havent you cross posted it to communites? There is shinee_replay and taeminho and shinee_girls

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linnhe July 11 2011, 13:11:36 UTC

He cannot prevent her death and nothing can stop his heart from breaking.
this sentence is pure perfection, it captures the essence of heartbreak imo

slightly malevolent-sounding laughter
Taeyeon ;_; I'm falling for you without even hearing you speak

Minho assumes Taeyeon's favorite smile, the smile saved for her alone
;__________; that is just
my poor heart

Minho will be beside Taeyeon foreverugh I was seriously about to tear up at this part, because Taeyeon's forever is so short, but then it ended and I manned up haha ( ... )

lubzyou July 12 2011, 02:55:41 UTC

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading this fic and giving me feedback. You are in the upper echelons of Lj authors (and you read the works of some heavyweights, as well). Even though we are friends, it is an honor that you took the time to read and leave such a full comment. Your compliments made me happier than you can know.

Your voice/the voices of your characters are clear and believable...
;~; You're too good to me. This^ just, really?!

Your concrit is more than welcome to me because I can only grow if I know where I need to work. Plus, it is good to know when I'm being too over-the-top.

Your encouragement is wonderful and I shall continue writing. :D

jinkibumiminho March 16 2012, 17:34:51 UTC

So...I got sucked into reading this. Wae so sad? But it's delicious in its own way. Sob. I really liked that you put in "next time" rather than having this turn out "too bad she died and now I'm throwing myself from the roof." It balances the melancholy with a glimmer of hope that even if she doesn't recover, perhaps Minho will re-think his desperation.